Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Love the story, continue pls😍😍. I got hooked from the beginning, officially my best story ever. The plotting is really amazing . Please continue, i will be waiting

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐ Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like. No / minor spoilers ahead. Wiriting Quality: The book has a nice flow, and the quality is really good. Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 80 chapters in just two days! Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre. Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs. World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little. I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yoursel

ok story is good and welI paced but here isa advice do not mantion name like omar:like this instead show how they reactedlike omar said while scratching his headin confusion okay and ignore if this is yourstyle keep the good work

i really want to know have you get a contract and how ?i hope to help me, I really tired .

The story is Great do far, the writing style is unique, the world building is amazing, the charachters are so realistic, the pacing gas been ok so far, nothing crazy. nothing fast. as for the plot itself, 10/10 it's nice, feels fresh and Overall Awesome. Great job Author San. keep up the good work.

Though the beginning was fine, the whole thing was rushed with practically no details. There isn't any substantial information about the characters which tells us more into their past and there doesn't seem to be any struggle for the main character. Overall, the novel needs improvement.

Great book and I like it that way. If the author continues his work will be world class

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I really like the story but from Chapter 18 it totally got fumbled up. I mean the timeskip is okish but it too much it remove the essence of the starting which I basically like the most. Their struggle how he overcome it with his pure intelligence. Overall the story before that is too good but from that chapter it goes downhill.I got totally confused what happening and when happening ,where happening. Each chapter like new time new place suddenly.

i am the author and I don't know what is lacking,if i am wrong guide me please, thanks

Dear Author,So far I'm liking what I'm reading. I'm loving the flow of the story specially the details haha. Though what I can suggest is that try to put in more content, specially the first few chapters— but that's just for me though I guess I'm just kinda used to reading books that have 2k or more words per chapter.Anyways so far I like what I'm reading and I hope the author continues on with writing not only to finish this wonderful work but also to work on more books as well in the future.(u2060｡u2060･u2060ωu2060･u2060｡u2060)u2060ﾉu2060♡Much Love,Loki