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make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads  won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate

I enjoyed reading this. The dual system is a nice twist from conventional novels! Imo the pacing was good, it didn't feel overly detailed and boring, nor did it feel too rushed. I like that they have to slowly develop their emotions overtime rather than quickly gaining an op system right away. Currently the characters and their personalities are clear with little or no confusion, so that's good! I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of it in the future

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

<p>Dia harus bisa berdiri berhadapan dengan Xi Empire sebelum dia mempersiapkan diri untuk bertahan dalam pertarungan.</p>

"Yes Ms. Jordan." Rachel playfully responded with a fake salute.

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

You'll never know if you don't go

You're going to be a Dad. I hugged him.