make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads  won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate

"Gripping, haunting, unforgettable—*The Eclipsion* will consume your soul!"

Seriously, I am in love with this novel, waiting for next chapters. This is the best Bl novel I have ever read. Noah, oh my god, he is so submissive, I am just overwhelmed by his personality so far and Kai is just like a bad boy singer looking for chance to tease kai.

Land Beyond the Hurricane is the type of story we all should be reading .

the story is beautifully written  very captivating and intriguin,  is very understandable and unique. Highly recommended, hook readers for more. keep going ...

The plot of the story was very enjoyable read! 🤞I was hooked from the start by the intriguing premise and the author's vivid descriptions🔖

Peak starting chapters, waiting for more

The book just has one chapter right now but looks pretty damn promising. Best of luck author

I just a simple guy who likes werewolves & Dragon my interest has been peekedso sir/Madame, Pls Proceed To Cook

Can’t wait to see more looks amazing already

The Plot is very Good and has a nice story The writer Should Keep On the Good work Please release More ChaptersIt is the beeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssst

It’s a great book so far I would rate it higher besides some of my opinions. The words he and her get switched up a lot and it progresses a bit fast and a few other small things but overall it’s good the mc isn’t op right off the bat and seems to learn from their mistakes so give it a read