romance in elite school

Fantastic!!

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Great novel keep up the great workPlease more chapters.                                                                                            

Ooof, yeah no. The story seems like a good one but because of the misused tenses and bad punctuation and grammar just makes this a bit hard to read.

Hello there. As the author, I'm obliged to give a review halfway through. This review is coming late since I already passed the halfway mark of my novel.Now, Now. lemme get to the actual review.As the author, I wrote while viewing my story as having no flaws, but I do admit my novel does have some flaws that can only be seen from the reader's side. So, it is prolly up to you to decide what those flaws are.My good points(this is something that can be verified by other readers)1. First and foremost, I'm deeply proud of my world-building. It is certainly on another level(okay, maybe this is self-love).  My lores are something that I can confidently brag about. Moreover, I make sure to minimize my lore-drops since I can barely retain many lores in my mind without checking back on my gdoc. This style of lore-dropping was something I developed over many chapters2. My characters. While it may be argued that I have a small cast of characters, each of them is impactful to the story. They have motivations that drive their side of the story and not all of them have a happy ending.         - Volume 1 featured only about a handful of characters. Of course, there were a lot of minor characters          - Volume 2 expanded my list of characters marginally         - Volume 3 involves my MC venturing into the human world so it is expected that I would have a lot of characters 3. Story Development: I took inspiration from many novels and implemented my take on non-human stories. If I were to give an accurate synopsis, it would simply be, 'The story about Reve's journey and the larger world'. I tend to stay away from regular troupes but that's because I'm viewing things from a logical side. Not all my characters fight. Not all opponents can be considered villains. Not everyone is evil and good. Also, the story is progressive. I think, too progressive. Each consecutive volume builds on the final plot. Stability of Update: I can boast of updating 2 chaps per day throughout the month of February.Writing Quality: my writing quality is better than average. Some chapters are superb and while some are just normal. This reflects on my mood when writing since I write better when I'm not rushed to finished the chapter.After everything, it is safe to say that the Arcadia System is a must read for those that love fantasy.

Why don’t you follow me and become Komo’s apprentice?Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life! When the Lord Komo appears, who dares to cause strife! Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life!Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life! When the Lord Komo appears, who dares to cause strife! Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life!Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life! When the Lord Komo appears, who dares to cause strife! Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life!

This book is well charactered with many different scenes that spike up my curiosity. The setting was designed so well that I could see the actual scene in my head. I wonder how you wrote such a magnificent book!

"Ah, so he hasn't told you in detail," she said, nodding to herself. I turned to her with a frown, wondering what she was talking about. "I'll let him tell you in his own time, maybe you can fix him," she said, making me frown a bit.