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Utter nonsense. The grammar is bad. There are "" marks when there is no conversation. The mc's ability has conditions to activate but seems to activate without them. Makes no sense. Author has rushed the book alot. Too much potential wasted over there.

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- Don't explain the structure of the whole world at the beginning of the book. Have the MC only know a bit about his location, and let the reader learn new things about the world with the MC.

perfectly clear to me that this scroll is to only be seen by the boy you hold in your grace. Somehow, someway your elusive brother has been in contact with Bell, even before you knew him yourself.

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With a grimace, Arawn got up to face the couple people who had found their bravery. The crowd had scattered by then, and most people had ran away, but not all. As if mocking Arawn's ability to threaten his life, the king stood in his original position and did not move.

He looks bewildered as he asks me a question.