i like the story , it's really interesting but i think you can develop more Akira

Will there be romance?                                                                                                                     

It’s nice to read a story where the MC isn’t an overpowered demigod from page one. Shocking, right?The pacing’s great—no endless filler or lore dumps that make you question your life choices. Just a solid story where things happen without dragging you into a coma.Overall, the stakes feel real, and the MC actually earns their wins. 4.7/5 stars no drama.

This story is very interesting and the story line is very clear and I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update fast and I will always be you fansGo for it.

Auto added after reading author's other work, Utopian system. This novel is just in its starting phase but already promises to be an entertaining piece. The grammer is excellent and the main character lovable...and dragons. I can never get enough dragons...

I wrote a review of this book a while back, and since then, I’ve kept an open mind about it. Honestly, it’s quite good. While it’s not the kind of novel that makes me say, “Wow, this is the best writing I’ve ever seen!” it does have a unique charm. The power system, for instance, is unlike anything I’ve come across before, which adds a fresh layer to the story.The interactions between Jin and the other characters are often interesting, though at times they feel a bit forced. Some chapters feel overly detailed, which might just be a personal preference on my part, but as of now, the writing quality has noticeably improved compared to the first chapter.I also really enjoy the character designs—they’re creative and stood out enough to get me interested into seeing other characters, even though I have my own preferences when it comes to characters (but I won’t dive into that). That said, I think the pacing could use some work. In some sections, the story feels like it’s dragging, while in others, it moves too quickly.The world-building is intriguing, but I feel like the story could benefit from a chapter dedicated to explaining more about the world—its history, lore, and overall context. Adding some insight into the past would help enrich the setting and give readers a deeper understanding of the story.Overall, this novel has come a long way, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it continues to grow and develop.

Great fantasy novel I love the MC and this is funny as hell

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Its very interesting and good as the storyline goes on and it keeps me wanting to wait for more chapters to come in.Cant wait for the next chapter to be released !!

I love a good fantasy storyline and this novel full off it.

Nice novel.  Waiting for more chapters.

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