waiting for all the chapters !!! 😭😭😭😭 how much time will it take???😭😭

So far I can say that the work is on a continuous rise and is wonderful and I can simply say that I am eagerly looking forward to seeing what the writer can write. In general, five stars. The world is purely bleak and dark. The character of the hero is similar to Li Fang Yuan's best hero.

This is my favorite novel because the sex sense is very good

Utter nonsense. The grammar is bad. There are "" marks when there is no conversation. The mc's ability has conditions to activate but seems to activate without them. Makes no sense. Author has rushed the book alot. Too much potential wasted over there.

Good novelKeeps the reader on the edge.Nobody saw the Vael dying on the fifth chapter.System feels natural part of the story instead of over explanation.

GUSH! ! I ALREADY LIKE THE CONCEPT ITS GIVING!! JUST LIKE FOOD WARS 👏 WELL DONE AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP!

Pretty cool book, I can see that the mc is also turning into a villain in chapter 11, this book gives me hope in seeing ruthless mc's again. I missed those unhinged books.

Only 16 chaptersWhat can I sayOther then Its good and hope you keep uploading author-San 👌

Hey Author hereI don't know you will like this novel or not but it's my first time of writing. Have some thoughts so please comments it. creation is so hard for me but I don't want to give up. I hope you will like this novel. Take care

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the writer is rally good at describing feelings and not rusning the story. thx for the good work.

Hi fellow newbie!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. I’m curious to see what comes next. Remember, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up!Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’d love to hear your honest opinions!Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best, IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!