This is an honest review from the author;This work promises a ton of exciting adventures and action not an illogical fantasy.Also this is my first book and my writing system is not yet perfected, but i promise you in a few chapters, it will definitely compete for top spot in the history of storytelling.I wish all my readers reach the end of this journey in peace and good health.Supreme-Witness welcome you all.

starts with an exciting fight scene. The nickname "The 14th Demon of Rebellion" is a great touch. I like how greatly you have described the fight. For now, it's a 3-star rating because it has just started but it has so much potential.

Another banger! The mc op af, it’s an early review, cus why not?? Keep it up!

I love how you can expand to another story for this universe. Your writing is great and your story has peaked my interest. Hope you can keep updating the story frequently 😁.

I‘ve read up to the 5th Chapter “Barbarians“, and until now, there are not many mistakes made and the writing style is pretty good. The charakter design is also very detailed and I hope there will be more Chapters released and he doesn‘t drop it anytime soonPlease keep up the good work

currently only 12 chapters and I'm liking the story and it's premise of mc having 9 body's and 9 systems to each body's profession though it will be difficult to remember which body has which profession but like I said I'm liking the story and hope it doesn't get dropped

Excellent writing the plot is very dominant keep on shinning P.S your story should get more reads 💗

Your novel has potential, though I only read till 7 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....

This is just like the westoria: sowrds and magic so I will love continue reading this!

I love this novel. The writing style is so on point up to my standards and can we talk about the mystery? I don't have any idea what's going on or how it started, like Alice in Borderland has been mentioned and I think I'll just settle with the fact that that's what really happened otherwise I might go mad lol

the book is interesting and fun, the language is undersatandable.. overall it's a lit

I'll be brutally honest in this review. The book is still relatively new and has potential so I'm not discouraging anyone from trying the book out. The book is a good read but a lot of factors are stopping me from rating it highly. We don't know what the world is like, little information has been provided. Writing feels like this is a machine translation, though the author's activeness suggests otherwise. Then the updating stability is plain bad. For a new book, at least a minimum of fifteen chapters should be stockpiled before the book is published. Releasing a chapter every 5-6 days is not a good move especially when readers haven't formed a connection with the book and so won't have the patience to wait it out.