DeRift

A great novel, I have no idea why it hasn't been contracted yet, but, it's still a great novel anyways.1. Writing quality is a lot better than most books on the platform, with there being only 4-5 writing mistakes every chapter. Also, for some reason, I don't know if it's just me, but I feel like the author uses the word "sneer" in the wrong context, and it just makes the story sound super weird at some points. Other than that, there's just a normal amount of errors per chapter that don't really take away from the story.2. The stability of updates is kinda weird with really sporadic updates, don't know what that's about, but yeah it's pretty inconsistent.3. The story development is pretty average right now, not a pacing that would make your heart race, but not a totally bad pacing either. It's a pretty average speed that's neither really good or bad.4. The character design is, again, like the story development, pretty average, with characters that are pretty well thought out. I just felt that some character traits were forced into certain parts of the story, making it a little weird.5. Now, this world background is outstanding. As of where I am right now, chapter 21, it's totally thought out in its fullest and just seems really intricate. It's really amazing, and I have no critiques on it.Overall, a good novel, and it's free. I mean, for some reason, a lot of the free novels are just a lot better than most contracted novels. Anyways, good job author!

I really like the red hair girl. But the story is really good, the character is overpower but still weak because there other people who are stronger than him. but overall I give this book a 8/10 in my opinion

I'm really surprised at how well written this novel is. The start is really really good. The story is compelling so far. Keep it up, author.

Fausta, knowing that this indicates a heated quarrel, decides to intervene. ❝Dominus only wishes to break words.❞

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

"WILLHELM!"

Zoey and Emily arrived, hauling a top mattress with them.  Jamal gave them a hand leaning it against the new platform.  He went to the ladder and climbed up, coming around to where he could reach down for the top of the mattress.  He pulled while the women pushed from underneath.  They got it up and leaned it against the pole with the pulleys.  That done, Jamal climbed back down to the roof.

Jenett's father was married to a rich mother who had not been the best at nurturing her child. Jenett was only a small child and didn't understand the concept of her mother's disapproval of her. That day, she ran away from home to a small park where she sat under a single tree. It rained really hard that day, and it left Jenett in a quivering mess.