Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.Your turn. And I look forward to your thoughts on my Going In Completely Blind fanfic.

I guess am really shameless dropping a review for my book the second time. Somebody got to do it ........you know what they say be your own number one supporter....as much as I want to believe you like my book I font cause you guys don't comment

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The world build is great in my opinion . Keep it up, looking forward to next chapters

This novel is very promising. However, as it stands today, it contains typographical and grammatical errors—errors that should have been corrected before the chapters were released.Keep it up author-san. I pray for your success.

I think Adam is a good MC, he is relatable and funny which makes the novel fun to read.  I wanna see more of the God's powers as Adam develops his owns.

This us a promising story with good characters and a great background.  The scenes are good enough and it is interesting enough. I love the flavour of the book , it keeps me interested.

I’ve only read a few chapters, and I’m already hooked! This story has so much potential, and I can’t wait to see where it goes. Loving the drama and excitement

Is there a relationship between the novel: "I can Use Filthy Game Skills In The Real World" and "I Can Use Filthy Game Currency In The Real World"Is it a remake?I read the free chapters from the first one  The writing is good, but the sex act is very very long. It loses its fun when it goes on too long.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

Traveler's Will is very solidly written, especially once the chapters reach the 20s and over. The author's sense of pace is very deliberate with the details, and really makes you feel the situation in a granular sense. The main character, Asdras, is strongly crafted, and while there is a System, it's not front-and-center in a way that interferes with the enjoyment. (Though that does make it a little harder to wrap one's head around).There are a few word use issues that are more obtuse than incorrect, and narratively I did find the MC gets his hand held by the plot somewhat, with other characters pushing him along a lot at times. But overall it's a solid read and quite enjoyable! Definitely good potential.

henlo, author here. A few things you should know about this book.1. This is the first book that I'm committed to finishing until the end (likely 300+ chapters)2. I am ESL. Please notify me when you find a grammatical error in the book3. Technically this is not my first time writing a book. I've made a school project novel of 200 pages in another language.4. I like to think that the story focuses a lot on the relationship between characters rather than the plot of the game world. Of course, I'm still doing a lot of world building. But just keep that in mindIf you're still reading this sentence then thank you. Please check out the book if you're interested.Feel free to ask your questions. Seems like other authors do QnAs in their reviews