New novel from miss beautifulg 😊 haven’t started yet but looks like an interesting story😃 thank you ☺️

Could have ‘sworn I left a review, o well my bad. I will write one now. I give this work 5 stars, I believe it deserves it. Hard to find good reads now-a-days but this was definitely a good read thanks for the chapters

Quít a different stories. I appreciate you to making more chapters. Very good quality farr from my friend novel. Keep continue brothers! I will watching how this novel could go farther

Alright, I’m 11 chapters in and the author asked for reviews, so here goes. There is minor problems with spelling so far, with the first few chapters being almost perfect, but the last few having one or two words misspelled. Nothing major, but I have noticed that readers have pointed them out in the paragraph comments, some as old as a week ago, and they are still there. So room for improvement, but better than 90% of WebNovel books. 8.5/10.Not going to say much for update stability, since it is currently a newer book and chapters are released consistently (for now). 10/10.The story, while compelling, hasn’t gripped me yet. (Minor spoilers) I don’t really care about his ex girlfriend or his arch enemy, and outside of the book being from the MC’s perspective, I can’t find myself rooting for him at the moment. There isn’t anything making me want him to win. Again, it’s early days (chapter 11) but I’m not immediately gripped into the storytelling, at least from a character perspective. 6/10.As with above, the characters have not been fantastic yet. I’m cautiously optimistic, but for now, they are merely outlines in a sketchbook, sans colour or flair. 5/10.The world is where I give this book brownie points. The author has pulled me in to this story almost purely on the back of worldbuilding. Giving me just enough to be interested, without making the next 5 chalters be purely info dumping. Room for improvement, and if I was the author I would be careful about power creep (a couple items and abilities already have the dreaded 200% or 300% bonuses), but I’m a sucker for a good VRMMORPG story. 9/10.I am going to continue reading, and I will try to update this review as I go, but I’ll probably forget. If anyone is interested in my updated opinion, hit this review up with a comment and I’ll see it then.TL:DR pretty good, minor improvements needed. 7.5/10 or a solid B.

‘A fire within you… that you even do not see.’ - It is a good start and the book looks interesting.  Keep the updates going.

I love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love this book! The writing is so monumental. Each chapter makes you want to read more.

I have read the reviews and comments of readers in Chinese community, and it's quite popular. However, there are a lot of chapters became trash and obviously impliedly saying that the authors brain is a big mess. I'm sorry to say but that is true.Anyways, the translator of this book is a God, possessed divine translation abilities. I thought the translator is the father of ancestral god. Ahahaha I wish you all the best master "Translator Ancestral God".

Loving it... followed from the insta link.

wow! i got to say, author KBKayboy has just outdone himself with this killer book.

this author really knows how to invoke emotions out of me. His previous book was also the same. It became too deep for me to read all of it.This one is no better. Damn I went through all stages of grief 2 times and all other kinds of emotions I'hv never felt before.Even with over 1000 books I have read, I still haven't developed enough mental resistance to read a book of this scale.I will come back to this when I am good enough.for now, peace..

Author here 😊. These is one of my very first book, just realised I can't post without rating it i put 5 star hehehe. Please don't be shy to write your comments so I can improve the story. Thank you, everyone is appreciated. Bye.

Any Updates? Is The Author Sill Alive?..