Definitely a good story so far and hopefully it gets picked. There are a variety of rough parts. The translation is hard to follow at a few points and can't decide on things like if people cultivate Qi or Aura. The MC is overall an interesting character but his lack of reaction to murdering lots of people sticks out as odd. The little girl is a little too obedient for her age but is otherwise another solid character. So far I like it and definitely recommend it as overall it is a very solid read. The world seems interesting and I am curious where the story will go. Only 25 chapter out right now though so YMMV.
This book so far is all about the character's complexity and growth.First, there's really no overpowered cheat system so far. He goes back in time but ultimately he doesn't even choose a class he is all that familiar with. Sure he has some skills and game knowledge from his previous life, but not really too much in-depth usage of this experience like finding epic treasures or performing speed runs based on this knowledge.So for now, the real appeal of this story centers around the contrast of this character. Sure he is kind of a mischievous, perverted fellow at heart but he also is a trainee priest with some kind of deep reason for doing this - it's definitely a first for me to see this. Also he appeared to be a loner in his last life but now he surprisingly has some friends and even somewhat stumbled on repairing a broken relationship with this neighbor.Either way, there's humor, heart, and potentially some intelligent gameplay in this story. And hey, who doesn't love a bold yet thoughtful fatty as an MC.
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