Honestly the first chapter was great and actually all the chapters . I haven't finished reading but when I say this novel is good I really mean it. This writter is talented .Whang Whu is my favorite character, and of course, the story is about her. I'm also intrigued by the little boy demon, even though I've only read up to chapter 5. He's already caught my interest🥹🫢

The story is good, I was hooked from the very first chapter and got into more chapters than i was suppose to lol. More power, and great work

it's traditional to give your work a 5 star review. Like the saying goes," Even if no one does, you must "

Writing quality: 4/5The writing quality seems strong in terms of world-building and the overall concept of the story. The characters are intriguing, and the concepts of the Luminara and Abysera powers provide a lot of room for dynamic storytelling. However, depending on the execution of dialogue and narrative structure, it could benefit from refining some elements to ensure emotional depth and flow.Story development: 4.5/5The story has a great foundation, especially with the concept of the Masters Tournament, the rise of Abysera, and the detailed history that’s been set up. With clear arcs for Lucian and other characters, it seems like there’s ample potential for growth and tension. Introducing different kingdoms and factions allows for plenty of plot threads to evolve, which is exciting.Character design: 4.5/5The characters, especially Lucian and Caelum, have strong foundations, with clear motivations and unique abilities. Their personalities are diverse, adding tension and depth to the group dynamics. The rivalries and alliances are set up well. There’s potential to explore even more personal quirks and development throughout the series.Updating stability: 3.5/5Since I'm still working on the updates, the stability of the updates might fluctuate. However, considering I have structured the outline of the first saga and characters, if the updates are consistent, the stability would improve. It might be helpful to establish a clear writing schedule.World background: 5/5The world-building is incredibly detailed. The kingdoms, history, factions, and unique energy system of Luminara and Abysera give the story a rich, immersive feel. There’s a lot of depth to explore within the world, and everything from geography to political structures is thought out. This creates a strong foundation for both short- and long-term storytelling.I think I would be quite biased considering this is my own story so yeah i could give it a 5/5 if i wanted to but that's alright...

Decent, but author randomly inserts 10 plus chapters of TERRIBLE world building/disjointed side stories. It’s like he is trying to mimic ROTSG, but pitifully.

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The novel has some incredible potiental with the story telling piquing my intrest from chapter 1, the mc is well contructed and the potential the plot upholds is unfathomable

Its been a long time since I've been this invested in reading something, good thing I found this novel on accident. A must read indeed.

A different concept of summoning. It’s not everyday that you get to see a 🐸 frog summoner 😂. And an elf summoner at that! First chapter is intriguing. I’m more interested to know more about the father 😉 though than the son in the first chapter. But I’m also curious to the development of the summoned frog 🐸.Overall it’s a good read to me. I will add this to my collection cause I wanted to know how the story progresses. Keep it up 👍!

i will read this book , looks interesting by its cover pic

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