The story of this novel is really good, especially the comedy, which I liked a lot. It gives off a strong feeling of brotherhood. From what I've read so far, the story is pretty great. I'd rate it 4.8/5.Any update about your 1st book “Hunting Period”?

I hesitated at first because there is only an author's review but it's actually a decent read, I will recommend this book!

I cant give to much detail to the review because it only has few chapters out, but it looks promising and interesting. The plot is catchy to the eye and in seems to be based in a world of a souls like game, pretty much like shadow slave.I think the idea is good and can explode but we will see the further it advances

Go on boss, please continue this novel, we will always support this.ps are you a mechine???

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

one of the greatest story i have read and the only real problem I get is that you should make casual conversation less dramatic to make it look more real sometimes conversation seems forced

Feels like one of em time stopping Mangas. When will the MC/God(?)/the world(?) make all em chicks or people around them aware of the immoral things they been doing? I believe the story would be good by two levels if we get some reaction from, at the very least them chicks he been clapping, shock, surprise, embarrassment and such... Would be nice

I have been waiting for this the whole time, was expecting a sequel but got something new!! Very excited about the future journey..!

Disgustingly exciting. Author is a loser.

I always enjoy reading his chapters , like this one , it's always told that Ethan's a genius so rather than showing him weak in the start , the author is using him as he has show from the start , he's a genius and this victor class ship will do alot of deeds , ethan ftw .

The Title itself brings people to read there is no story at all just fillers to fill the chapters

Nothing to look here.. .. .. .. .... .. . Just a shameless author doing shameless things.. .  .... ..