Midnight Offering: Hades's Little Pet

This has to be the cringiest but funniest thing I've read in years! This is such an amazing story/idea. Fix the writing quality a bit. I would like to rewrite this, but I need the authors pass first :)

The novella is good, but it contains something that irritates me endlessly in novellas: the author gives the main character incredible potential, but he doesn't use it fully. This is the most annoying thing one can see in a novella, and it's also the reason I lost interest and stopped reading.The main character often repeats that he needs to get stronger as soon as possible, and he has the opportunity to surpass all the cultivators on Earth in, well, a week or two at most. Here's how he can do it—two ways that the author, for one reason or another, doesn't use or ignores, explaining it with dumb reasons.The first way, of course, is to have s** with Xia Shenyi, but he foolishly doesn't do it because of some promise he made when he was naive. And now, even after realizing how much he needs power, he still uses this stupid and incredibly annoying excuse.The second way is something anyone can figure out after reading about his physique's abilities, and that is s** with virgins. With his money, looks, and strength, he could have s** with hundreds of girls in a week and raise his cultivation to the world's peak. And as for his seed allowing people to become cultivators? Who cares? Without techniques and help, these women wouldn't be able to become cultivators anyway. So, the only thing standing between him and power is his stupid restrictions, because of which, 100% someone close to him will suffer in the future.I'm not saying he should go out into the streets and find them one by one. He could have used a brothel, which could have made for an interesting storyline. He could have also used that sect of some flower people, whose master he saved in the ruins. There are plenty of opportunities, but they aren't being used.

it's too much bland in the sense characters,story,world background and the stage is almost always wrong which makes more confusing than it was already.Even if it was cliche i wouldn't have mind but it's like written in the form of summary of cliches story.And the mc doesn't even feel interesting, you can literally go at him for the kill but he won't kill only break your sword..  And also the cringe justice talk which makes no sense.

Hello author I am a fellow trope here to support you, nice work, and keep this up and in the future, you're going to be in the big leagues. And a nice choice of topic btw, I love it.

up till chapter 40. very good pre reincarnation sequence. very uninspired post reincarnation, boring life boring magic boring Interactions. all of it lacks any spark of ingenuity and feels very generic. i know it probably gets better after a while but i just don't feel like suffering through 100 chapters just for a chance especially since nothing so far has shown any promis. the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W

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"H-hi Pancake-etta."

Tristan just shook his head helplessly