VRMMORPG: The Silent Rebirth

Looks great ... I like mia

Nice story , captivating characters lot of suspense too  Kudos to the author ......

The worldbuilding caught my eye, really, it is very dark and fantastic, it is not too whimsical for a novel with such deep themes, and the writing style of the author is greatly enjoyable. It is very luscious without being overly descriptive, I do not have much to complain about here.

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This Leto was much younger and, in a sense, wet behind the ears as they say on earth, lacking in combat experience and tactics, a far cry from the older Leto I knew, not to mention the earth here got people with powers and abilities, something I don't remember knowing in the other Leto's memories, thus, my conclusion was that, it wasn't the same world or at least not the same timeline.

"There, there. They won't hurt you. Mind telling me what happened Hinata-Chan ?" Hinata immediately had a huge blush on her face when she heard the unfamiliar suffix. He had to supress a mocking laugh when he saw that.

Suara percikan air dari langkah kakinya perlahan hilang, membekas, meninggalkan jejak kaki kecilnya dan hilang oleh aliran air.

"No results. See? Sabi sa'yo eh.  Pinagloloko lang  tayo ni slave. HAHAHA. Ikaw naman, uto-uto! "