This novel by Naomi writes reminds me of how the world can't always be on our side. As first read about Adena's struggle, I found myself questioning the true cost of her survival. Naomi's storytelling style and well described characters make this novel a must read for fans of this genre.If you're looking for a story that will keep you up late at night, then MY EX'S BROTHER FORBIDDEN DESIRE is the perfect choice.

A nostalgic yet tragic start! The story hooks you with Thomas's peaceful retirement, only to flip the tone with an unexpected twist. The emotional buildup makes you feel his faded glory, and the mysterious white room leaves you craving answers. Can't wait to see where this goes!

It's nice to see authors trying something different with inhuman MCs. Usually, the story starts with the protagonist dying and Reincarnating as some monster that needs to start leveling up in a jungle, but this one charts its own path.Liam is an insect-type protagonist and instead of us seeing him strive for survival in a wilderness, we start the story with him and his family and how their relationship works.I commend the author for going into detail about how Liam's family are quite devoted to his unusual needs. the challenges in raising him are perfectly expressed and for me that makes it easy to both sympathise with him and get attached to his family.I like the wholesome moments the story expels, though some of them seem to be leading to something ominous. In any case, if some tragedy were to happen... I'd definitely feel it.Great piece author!

honestly speaking, this novel is intriguging, although, this is my first time of reading novel like this, it is worth reading, I will recommend it to everyone, more update pls!

Decided I wanted to rate my own story, so 5/5Anyways if you have any questions or any webnovel/novel recommendations then reply to this.

Hooked from the very first chapter. I was shocked to see that this is this authors first book, after looking for many books on this platform, I finally found the one for me. Thank you for writing such a good book, when you become popular later, just know I was here from day one

it's a very good novel so far but I felt like there could've been more done in the beginning it felt rushed when sera was transmitted into the novel she went to the academy right away I wish there was a few chapters in between where maybe she should've met a few of the heroine outside the academy so it didn't feel so repetitive maybe a childhood friend or parents business partner and theres the fact that i felt like most characters in this book had blonde hair or blue eyes for whatever reason nevertheless I look forward to the rest of this story it's not poly right and I look forward to the authors future works

A story of a war maiden and the sin of gluttony.....I think. I can see how much potential it has especially with a beginning like that. It's an interesting story, though grammatical errors and words structures are off on almost every chapter.  The story is interesting overall. and I recommend Grammarly app for editing

I just read the first chapters but so far I really like the writing style and characters I met so far. Keep up the good work :)

i feel betrayed or lied to me even. The story is nice, but if the girls have d*cos let it be none the bio also the cover is so misleading of the MC personality potential.

I’m so hooked on this book, y’all pleaseeeee😩😩

Romance? Harem? Yuri? NTR? Lemons? System? Hiding identity/power? It would be good to have tags in the synopsis to know what I am getting myself in.