Timelock

first thing first, how the f someone with unranked talent don't get seat? where the f they sit before getting the talent? floor? and why the teacher think it can help to motivate the student even thought evolving the talent is very hard, impossible even. the future is just a fking cliche over and over and over and over oh and over.

This novel is only worth your time during the first few chapters because of its interesting concepts. After you have reached a certain chapter you will start to get bored due to its repetitiveness. The only thing that this novel does is...Open Internet Cafe --> Local people are impressed --> Some powerhouse comes to disturb the store --> Face slap the powerhouse --> Tournaments --> rewards never mentioned again --> Create a store in a new area --> repeat.The problem with borrowing of other intellectual properties is that the story will be shallow without any uniqueness at all. You will notice that the story does not improve itself at all. At first after RE1 is out, the story just talks about RE1 story and its characters rather then improving its own story. You can see that with Diablo as well. Once you got to The Legend of Sword and Fairy and you never heard of it at all you notice that the story becomes bland.Black tech is not so much of a novel but a Lure that tries to prey on other peoples child hoods or nostalgia. The novel at its core is not a novel but a place of stolen intellectual properties that they to monetize on. This is Illegal due to the fact that the writer or publisher is making money of this because making money off fan-fiction work is Illegal unless you have the legal paper work from the makers of these works. But hey China usually steal ideas to begin with so its ok right? No. Another problem with this novel is the items the MC uses from these games. You notice that when the MC used that INF rocket launcher that one time its never used again throughout the whole story. It's the same way with the Pegassi Osiris, Terran capital Pirate ship, and Ghost Sniper Rifle with INF nukes ( somehow? )This is just another way the "novel" preys on the readers nostalgia.At its very core the novel would be nothing more than a low-tier crappy wuxia novel if they did not use other peoples works. Only thing rated more then 1 star is Translation and stability which the site seems to focus on most unless its an old novel then they just stop working on it. *Cough* *Cough* Dark king *Cough*.

I think that this novel is starting off very nicely and if the author continues to develop the novel it will do really well.😀Hope u can keep up this quality of writing and rate of releasing and lastly wish u all the best 🥳😃😊

Pretty good really enjoyed it hope it gets picked.~~~~~~~~``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````

This story has such a great premise, and a unique character in Lucy whom we haven't seen before in serial fiction. She is so strong and selfless  I am really excited to see how the story unfolds. The writing style is so inviting as well. I feel I'm a part of the Hastings family!

Good updating quality and writing quality. Story has an overflow where you can follow to a good degree. That being said some major cons are as follows. Authors lack of commenting back to multiple criticisms during the novel. Second would be the Mc personality shift. Goes from hardworking to goofing off. He is initially shown as hardworking and serious but now he acts like a total clown. Too much forced humor that ruined a lot of the novel. Mc also seems to be pushing more towards a hero/shonen type. Mc also makes numerous idiotic mistakes such as not even checking the market price before selling something. Keeps making dumb mistakes constantly and under utilizing the lotus. Had so much potiental but left with so much frustration.

nice story and I have a great time to go

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