This is the story I have been looking for, the first chapter I was amazed and it feels like it was adopted by anime series or movie, I am looking for a new chapter 🙂

the story has much potential as the mc was a scientist, you had a point about government and their greed, you could use the cancer as an example for their greenness,everything else is great.and I am happy for this story as I am a student who attend science faculty in my first year.

I'm pretty shameless so~. Anyway, this is a practice short story for another larger novel I wanna write. I won't say much except that I'm quite confident I'll tickle your fancy if you love deep relationships. Not romance. Just very deep and touching. (And between girls haha). Just check it out!

Came onto this by pure chance, pretty solid. Liking the system, especially how it differs from others, creating its own existence. I like the unique character cast and action, and hope to see it grow.

Hey there! Loved it. Awaiting the Trails of Honor! This is a grounded, character-driven story that throws you into a world where survival isn’t guaranteed, and neither is victory. No overpowered protagonists, no convenient plot armor,just grit, strategy, and the weight of every decision.The writing is smooth, the pacing keeps you hooked, and the world feels lived-in. The characters? They’re not saints, but they’re not mustache-twirling villains either. They make mistakes, they struggle, and that’s what makes them compelling.If there’s one area for improvement, it would be pacing in certain sections,sometimes, a bit more introspection on world detail could enhance the immersion. Some conflicts resolve quickly, and letting them breathe a little more could add extra impact.Overall, Beneath No Banner is a solid, engaging read, well-written, and refreshingly grounded. If you like stories where brains matter as much as brawn, this one’s worth your time

I like the story and like everything that's going on.  Just the grammer could use some improvement.

honestly really impressed. I read your other novel- the fairy and the wolf one, and ended up dropping it after 370 chaps. Despite having read the other novel however I honestly can't believe this was made by the same person. It's only 14 chaps yet it has a near perfect start. It introduces us to the interesting main characters, teases us with their complex personalities, and then drops us into some good old-fashioned combat, that gives us some glimpses at what we can expect from the future brawls. I AM HOOKEDonly thing I'm worried about is the harem aspect, I like harem... BUT not when everyone is in the harem. like it's fine for MC to like see, but when ever female character is there to either have, fantasize, or become a slave to sex, then it devalues the whole story.there's already the mom, sister, wolf, guard, and its only 14 chapters. sure those are just the ones he "loves" but let's be serious for a moment, it's not lookin so good. I hope this book does better on this front then the wolf one

i will just give you five stars looking forward to this story

Wo! This novel is really worth it. The first chapter and 2nd chapters were slightly boring, but God is it better from that time. A gem!!The comedy and actions sequences are its strengths. Grammatical error? Didn't find a single one. The language is really evocative.

The story is very good, especially the kingdom building element. Keep it up author nice work

From what we got it is a really interesting idea but the writing needs to improve, i don't mean this in a bad way for example you use the same words a lot of times like I , I said ,I thought you could next time use stuff like as i said, thinking to my self, doing so basically try and use different words. The second issue was you don't let us find stuff for ourselves  for example when Cyrus's dad tanked the fire ball and said "I'm immune" it sounded dry and boring try only hint that he has those abilities aside from these issues it's really good 👍

Story seems nice with catchy synopsis and cover and this book all these things which attracts meThis basically reincarnation novel,well explained story and shows every emotion in perfect wayI had read till 6 chapter and plot impressed me a lot.... reading forwardWriting Quality:4.9/5Character Design:5/5World Background:4.9/5I would like to give this book 4.9/5 starsBest of luck author!