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cheriii
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Great book!I normally don't like harem, but this book is both funny and spicy. I really hope you don't flop the story though. Don't disappoint author. let's see where it goes.
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Let's see where it goes.................
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Obligatory 5 Star. Hey author here. I wrote this out of frustrations from reading too much books and not getting I want to happen. First time writing something. This was new and a very enjoyable experience. Hope you enjoy the ride. Thanks.
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I like vampire stories. This is a nice vampire story.
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It was an amazing story i liked the writing and all the different characters it was great but the character designs anyways ts ts ts ts ts ts ts ts ts pmo pmo w mans ts rs frfr
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writing quality = Awesome Story development = no reason to care for the characters beyond the surface traits due to how fat the scenes keep changing . There is almost no character development for any of the main characters, side characters, or the supporting characters beyond what little is written and that can be inferred by reading between the lines.character design = nothing is really known about ANY of the characters and the side characters to the point that all the cast feel like wet cardboard cutouts and not really matters what happens to them, including the MC.update stability = too soon to tell.TLDR- Very little is known about any of the characters. Pacing goes from 0 to 100 very quickly, and scenes change way too fast. No character building/ growth or reasoning of actions beyond surface level, which feels very forced and not natural.
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I mean this is quite decent. Although by a friend I decided to leave a review. I love books set in the mediaval times and this delivered. Gritty but impressive.Highly recommend!!!
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Good character and world-building; Slivan is likeable and he knows his shit. The only problem was that he believed he could take the Titan. He couldn't. Now, after 3 years, he was offered the chance to redeem himself and maybe save his friends.
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I really, really, really, really like this story! I can't wait to see the character designs. I heard the author is Filipino like me so ang galingggg hehe
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This story was a surprise to me. I came to satiate my curiosity but ended up deeply engrossed in the plot. The storytelling was vivid and relatable. Character development and backstory were well-portrayed; bravo, author.I look forward to Marcel's growth, and how he will navigate through his circumstances.
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It was a good piece of writing. It would be nice if there is no lock and the updates are good.I am waiting for more updates.It would be nice if you staged a coup d'état, declared yourself Napoleon, created a version of Napoleon's laws adapted to the world you have built and declared a revolution.It would be very cool if he sent the head of his family to the rival duke. That would be a neat cause for war. He can also be allied with the family where his sister is.Also, it would be nice if the troops you Finally, it would be nice if you introduce the family coat of arms and flag; And then add a change to the flag with the symbols of the revolution.If you read this, I wish you the continuation and quality of your work, Mr. Author. call are suitable for the colors of your household. This prevents the units from becoming rainbows.
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The characters are soooo well written it’s incredible could definitely compete with the best
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