REBIRTH: My Forbidden Entanglement

I have not read all the chapters but what I've read leaves me a bit disappointed. The character is a bit juvenile and methinks that he acclimated to his situation a bit too quickly. The writing also I find is a bit childish but that might just be me. I will read a bit more before I pass my final judgement.

is this dropped ?? (u2060・u2060–u2060・u2060;u2060)u2060ゞ please update more.

Novel is quiet interesting in my opinion.....1. Writing quality is upto standards, just that there are some mistakes here and there in spellings like calling a male her and a female him.Some sentence structures are not properly structured...like you can change, "There is not something will happen to him" to " Don't worry, Nothing will happen to him "etcetc.2. Story is also developed well till now....nothing much to say, you can see the gist of the story from the synopsis and read it....3. Character design is also detailed, nobody seems like  2 dimensional character...though you can try giving some characters some inner thoughts and could also give them some backstories to make them appear more real to the readers.4. For now updating stability is also well, as can seen from 8 ch/ week on the front page.5. Don't know much about world background....I mean it's just starting afterall......Overall nice work from Author San.

This is Brandon Gould the writer of the Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a Review Swap i sent to you a while agohere is my review:i read all of the chapters aviable and i enjoyed it, my overall impression is that you have taken a lot of influnce from The Walking Dead  and other Zombie like media and trops. with are not a bad thing when writting a Zombie book. but this is my opion if you stay to close to what has already been done before then that will not make you stand out from other Zombie/apolpose books. with again using things like the father and dauther. Twins/ may or may not be like the ones from the walking dead, saving the pepole that might be bitten at a place where the group is getting food or suplies. maybe its just what i got out of it. but i did enjoy it what was here so far, i am just giving you a suggesten on something that i would do since you are rewritting it anyway.

Behind Satsuki a screen glowed, revealing Iori.

        Tumalikod na silang dalawa at iniwan ang barkada.

Suddenly her eyes widen, she sat there in shock not knowing what to do.

He did not answer the question. When Bard had some doubts, his MK-l basic