Very Disturbing Stories

Love the plot and how it's going...

A good harem with great plot like author's other book.

This story isn't exactly bad but It also isn't that great either. I think the main problem I have with this story is the speed at which the MC improves. It just makes no sense, and is also rather unsatisfying. Take for example his blacksmithing. Every time the author mentions the subject, it's always saying how it takes years upon years to progress a level. While it takes the MC ONE DAY. That is absolute nonsense. Even if you have a godlike teacher. The author also doesn't explain how things work either. Like the warrior levels; maybe I missed it but how do warriors level up? The MC just seems to level up just because he worked till exhaustion. Is that how that works? If so why does it take years for other warriors to level up. Regardless it's unsatisfying how fast the MC does things. The translation quality is fine, although its also a little boring too. That could just be the authors writing style though. The world is okay, if not a little dull. The MC himself is pretty meh too. He has this kind of faux complexity with his love, father, and whatever. Its boring and generic. Alright, well I wrote a lot for no reason, so sorry for a rant I guess. In conclusion don't bother with this story unless you have nothing better to do.

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I dont know how to express what i feel about reading this novelAll I can think of about mc was his mentally weak a guy who's easily ntr-ed I think.....?  Ignore my review

Does this novel contain a female MC? Yes. Could there is more drama than your drunk uncle twerking at a family gathering while his wife is snogging the waiter? Maybe. This novel is full of plots, villains, powerslaps and intense looks.. If you really want to find out, read onwards.

Enzo sat there for awhile, waiting for a moment to speak up, however he was having trouble forming the words on his mind.

Mary looked up when one of her colleagues nudged her to look at Mia. She suddenly felt jealousy on seeing a woman more beautiful than her and have all her attention stolen. However it all soon vanished when she saw the Young Master sleeping soundly in the woman's arms. She thought of creating a scene to make this girl go to jail so to get rid of her jealousy. Soon she started screaming,"Huh?! Who are you and what are you doing to the Young Master?!?! Let him go right now or else I will call the police!!". She kept accusing poor Mia like this for a long time much to her displeasure. Soon a handsome,hot and sexy man with Short raven hair came to scene with long,elegant strides. He had a slightly dark complexion(barely noticeable),a sturdy and tall(taller than MC or FL) build. He also had heterochromatic eyes (one baby blue and other Amber) just like the child she had in her arms. She instantly recognized him and then soon recognized the child in her arms. She knew the man to be Ren James and the kid to be Kyle James. She wished to just put the boy down and run for her life for she would lose her life if she stayed here and he did remembered her.