The story is quite good need some more characters and convo . Like chapter 1.Mystery and thrill is built but also character development too.Keep the work going it may even bring new world and storyline .

I really liked the plot it is interesting and charming in it's own way , the revenge chapters were good . There is always this unexpected endings or twist at the end of each chapter which are just catchy

It’s impressive that, even at just five years old, the child is already determined to learn how to survive on his own in the wild. The old man is bound to be some insanely powerful figure, or maybe he had a hybrid child in the past, which will come up in his backstory. That would explain why he reacted so distinctly to Rai.

I don’t know what's more gripping, the sypnosis,  chapters or the pictureGood job dear, I love it 😀 ❤️

A phenomenal piece of work. A literary art that pulls one in from the get go. I truly find system novels to be a great appeal, yet this book finds a loophole and dives in and gives a breath of fresh air to an overdone concept. A fantastic read, despite the little number of chapters. I await for the release of more, for now, I shall relish in what I have been provided.

The book is amazing Character development is top notch After reading a few chapters I’m convinced the other chapters would be interesting and adventurous The omega ML is quite a mystery yet he keeps me hooked into it I’d continue after my exam I’m going in to write math😹💕 great book aight

I love the way the author writes his novel, I was almost digging my nails into my flesh, anticipating what would happen next. Please, author, I need to know what happens next....please

I love it! It's only a few chapters, but this novel totally deserves more views and readers. It's highly recommended! The story has such a captivating vibe, and the characters are super relatable. I think more people would really connect with it if they gave it a chance. Seriously, it’s a hidden gem waiting to be discovered! What do you think?

I just watched a YouTube short about, I think, this book. Is there more than just eighteen chapters? Is there a raw somewhere?

very good book BTW this is the second book I have given 5/5...The story is good just waiting for new chapters

Damn! This book is fire🔥 To think I almost not read it. I love this 💕

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