Veil of Eternal Dusk

It's by the author we all know and love.And I pretty much love the name Lin Fan at this pointCan this novel even go wrong? Is it possible? If that actually happens , then rather than the belief that we GO to hell , it's more likely that we are already in one

I love to read Renegade Immortal; it just really feels like a true cultivation story. I think that's because this is one of the very few in Chinese fantasy that has a character that has developed into a weathered and introspective old monster over the progression of the story. The brutality of the world is well described, with corpse sects running amok and old ancient legacies of gods, demons, and devils present. It all sets up for good fantasy. Throw in where cultivation inspired introspection is written down and not simply referred to as "closed-door training." This is a great read!

Interesting synopsis buuut.. then I see this "however what they didn't expect was that zombies had unimaginable VITALITY!!"filler filler f

Everything is good and I enjoyed every turn of the story... The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine".....Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores....But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel.  Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving onWhats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

Just starting my book, and reviewing it to leave this here. The theme is historical, the theme I love. I have no clue how good that does on Webnovel, I actually think it doesn't really good. But that doesn't matter, I like writing. Planning to write a whole lotta more chapters, so stay tuned.Have a good day,C.M.A.P. Rijvers.

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Invisible Dragon Chapter 51 done