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aceZ0
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Author review! Here's what to expect:Two of the sweetest male leads ever. Give them a shot! They'll grow on you quick <3High fantasy world - MC swaps places with a villain, and ML is a fairy (Nephilim).Slow burn romance - but from the moment the two characters lay eyes on each other, they're instantly connected.High quality writing. No NPC behavior here - every character is layered, and has their own motivations, dreams, and secrets.No instant-OP everything. Magic and system unfold naturally and develops with the plot. (Eventually) some of the highest quality R-18 you can find. Deep, layered, emotional intimacy that advances their relationships - and is also - really - hot :DHave any questions for me directly? Reply to this review! I hope to make this story one of the top BL novels on WebNovel and that all starts with your support!
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World building good, flaw is good, pacing a bit slow at first but still can savor, the character building good; however, the book itself is still ongoing, I need to see further how it will go. Pacing, great overall is good. A little tweaks on a grammar, and a bit cleansing to the unccessary words in dialogue and paragraph, all will be smooth to go. The story itself is interesting, the start was a very simple yet full of life, the first character who enter the scene, relate me much immediately, 😂😉overall, I highly recommend this story.
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A toxic relationship and enough drama to keep you interested 😂 great
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it's pretty good i am too lazy to write any thing more bye ..............................................................................................
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This is a pin, I'll change this once I already got to chapter 30 so I can judge this book throughly. That being said, this book has a good potential too
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The suspense is killer! Maybe drop some subtle hints about the bigger mystery earlier on? It’ll make the reveals feel even more mind-blowing
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Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
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make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate
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A harsh review but that's the truth. Author had a promising premise but wasted it by rushing the story from the get go and seemingly brute forcing things like inserting romance very early on. Inconsistencies also started to prop up and judging by how the author just seemingly let it slide, not so promising. Thus, a rather unfortunate wasted potential that was ruined by blatant issues that made it bland, shallow, and forced.Benefit of doubt that the later chapters improved but the early chapters pretty much already crippled the read for me.
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Just terrible. Don't waste your time on this.
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I hope the author can update more chapters😂😂😂PLEASE😛 very interesting novel each chapter is worth the money spent 👍 love❤️❤️❤️
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From what I read, this story is fine. The writing can be a little too conversational rather than literary, but some of the descriptions are interesting. However, some of them I found to be needlessly overcomplicated to the point where it becomes hard to follow and less compelling without re-reading. The world building of this story is good, I feel like I would enjoy this more if the writing was more straightforward and unpretentious.
The world of dragons