Vanishing Point: Unwritten Places

such a beautiful story

Reading this novel is like watching one-piece anime the author drags and drags the chapters on, something which only should of took 20-30 chapters and managed to take 60. I just really dislike the author writing as he drags stuff out.

Okay so I just started reading this but does the story get out from the forced "lucky" encounters and just happening to meet gramps who was going to die and just happening to have an antidote and the gramps family comes to plead for mc's help instead of being suspicious about him when he like 5min before said that the gramps is in danger and then he is poisoned? Oh and the gramps doesn't even ask what happened but just says that oh you saved me here take this card and you can have all the free sh*t you want...

alright I have lots of reason why I rate this story below 3 star but im gonna save another poor soul before they read this story so1. Author decide to make MC aka Lucifer Stupid & did more stupid stuff in order to expand word count, some problem could easily be solve in few paragraph but nope author decide to make mc did stupid stuff in order to increase the word count like directly hacking SHIELD & get himself interrogate while he could simply use his other identity to solve his problem including lucifer bootlicking Tony stark because he didn't want to build his own connection.2. Author Strictly would never ever let mc do some drastic action & make sure the story line strictly follow the cannon making this story a self insert rewrite wish fulfillment novel, no idea whether there'll be Harem since I drop this story.3. Author way too underestimate the infinte stone of MCU.

This novel is being re translated as a new novel called thriller paradise (Translation work) it starts at ch 193 and is 40 ch ahead and still being updated. Regularly!!😁 So go that novel when done reading this!!!! Now! Now!!!! Why the flip are you still reading!!!!!😠💢

Overall this novel is pretty good, the protagonist is interesting and while the story is not that amazing it's still pretty interesting and good enough for a fun read

Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in!Things to expect from this story...1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head. 2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood. 4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff.5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected.5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes!6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises.7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character.8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think.Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect 🙃

just a question:why is your update schedule so chaotic?i really hate when am waiting hours and refreshing every 10 min and at the end there is no updateplease at least follow the schedule you have given the readers and inform us when to expect the next chapters am not sure if should continue reading the novel as sometimes it feels like you are going to drop it same happened with prime originator too i really loved the story and the world building but one day you stoped then i found out later that you haven't dropped it