good novel overall, a new system that i have never seen before, The main character knows what he wants and what he is doing. only one bad guy showed up so far and he is not a brainless fool, absolutely love the female characters the only bad thing i can talk about is the grammars otherwise this is a 5/5.

It is still early but the idea is great. Looking forward to the character development.

This is a good novel if you're looking for a read. The author is quite good at writing and the update rate is consistent as well, considering that he just began writing.The story development is good, but the biggest question is when will the MC turn into a teenager, he's literally only 11 years old! Don't get me wrong, a young mc isn't bad, but my fair share is 13 and 14.The character design is also something to talk about, the characters are well portrayed and we see the MC has loving parents and there are also a good amount of other characters.As I've said this is a good bookNow, the world background.I get that he's just a child, but the fact that he doesn't concern himself with even a little of the politics of the elven kingdom is unreal.Then the world also isn't explored, there isn't much known about it. That being said he's about to go to the academy, meaning that they are obviously going to learn about the world.In short, Writing quality: 5Stability of updates: 5Story development: 5Character design: 5 (especially his mother)World background: 3It's a good book to readBut as of what I've read, MC is practically invincible.On a side note, not relevant, I want pancakes, not waffle

Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?

I love how the system is made, it's clear and not confusing. Ash's journey is exciting, and I'm looking forward to where it takes him. The story is beautifully written, and every word is easy to understand. Good job, author.

okay I love a good revenge plot and I Can't wait for our MC to end her enemies literally ☺️ I will enjoy this revenge!

A very cozy read with some comedy in it but overall it has potential and uniqueness to it, I'm rooting for you to win WSA 2025!

One thing I would point out is that it's so simple yet easy to understand the world building that gradually happens, and how the plot manifests itself through the MC's actions and choices. Although there is very much room for improvement with as good as it is, it was definitely quite the enjoyable read.Keep it up, mate

I don't want to be a dickhead so I will give 4 stars, but genuinely i don't want to give that much but it's your first novel so i gave that much to motivate you here are some of my suggestions 1- Improve the synopsis, it's bad I mean really bad, at first after reading the synopsis I don't feel any attraction or interest to go and read2) Some things are confusing in Chapters you should mention thoughts and speak aloud abbreviations 3) And some mistakes like in the first chapter you didn't mention what race did the goddess suggest, If it's a mystery you should mention it that is, I hope you can take this positively

The book is worth reading, readers you will like it.

You are very good and you write very well! Everything I have read written by you is ✨✨✨✨✨ Good luck, man, and I hope you become a famous writer, successful as you deserve, internationally!🙌

been looking for something unique and this right here is what i want...5 stars..keep it up dude