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HambinoRanx
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The world creation is the only slow thing here as otherwise the author is pacing the story perfectly some times fast sometimes slow.The world is still very much hidden from is but may be because the timeline is based on the current world and time the author is doing this on purpose.
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I must say, the writing quality is superb. The author has done a brilliant job in world building. I am eagerly waiting for new chapters.
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Keep up the good work, i love your book
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to be honest I really like this noval the emotions ,the comedy scenes, the face slapping moments, the expense, and the originality which is not seen in many noval in now date . and the way you express the R- 18 chapter is perfect. there are many novle I see that the whole noval are filled with R 18 chapters which had no emotion no character development no build up and this thing I really respect the author the way he express this. you should try this noval at least give a chance to read a free chapters .ππ
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making an advance post before reading it cause I know it's going to be π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯.it's a awspec work don't need to read it to know that it's going to be good .
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Iβve been conflicted about this author for a while. There are no personal issues or deals between us, but I must admit, their writing style has its merits. It blends a classic approach with a distinctive touch, showing experience beyond what a beginner could achieve. The storylines are absolutely wildβin a good way. If youβre into dark themes, mixed with mystery, comedy, and an overpowered main character, itβs definitely worth giving a shot. If you donβt like it, feel free to come back and share your thoughts. As a professional writer, I respect your choice!
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I was really impressed while reading this story. The writing quality was good and there were no grammatical errors which shows how much effort the author put in this story. I won't say anything about the updating stability but I'll rate it as a 4 out of 5. The world building and the story development was nothing but amazing. In fact, I have no words. Even the characters interaction feel realistic to an exact. Overall, this is a good story. Keep up the good work author π
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This is a really fun read and there are a lot of free chapters to give you a good feel for the novel. i'd binge this novel with no regrets but I'm running low on coins .Now the MC does get a bit of plot armor but the story is written so well you won't be mad at it. i especially liked that his AI needs upgrades so even his op assistant can be improved on. id like to see future chapters have him explore fighting on a battlefield to maintain everyone's happiness but that may be cynical of me π
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Hey dear readers , I'm your writer shamelessly commenting on my own book . Let me tell a secret this is my favourite and first novel ever. I have never written anything before. But I'll make sure that you don't find that much mistakes . Please read before making assumptionsπ€. I'm waiting for your love and comments as it will help me making the story more interesting and correcting my mistakes .
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Amazing story so far, keep up the good work. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€amazing job author ππππππππππthis book is perfect so far I'm in chapter 39 and I live ue especially the fights
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Great!! Keep up π«‘π«‘π«‘π«‘π«‘π«‘ .
The Forsaken Daughter