Two Siblings In The New World

I’m at chapter 24 and this is just such a sweet story. I really admire Kat and Aiden.

😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃What a good story, too good. I wait for more.I really get excited about owning a team, and taking it to the top. You should improve the entire football proposal, invest in a better academy than Manchester or Liverpool. Also, have physical trainers.

sigh......................................... it like reading mtl.. it hurt my head... i can feel it few of my brain cell was gone...😵😵😵😵😵

this is my first novel, Pls you guys should support me, comment and tell me where I am meant to improve in my writting, criticism is welcomed. I will try to improve more on my updating stability Pls bare with me, as for those who gave the Nobel power stones I'm grateful Pls continue supporting me .

If you are looking for a suddenly OP MC, this is not it. However, if you want an actual well developed story with actual logical MC then this is for you. Our MC suddenly wakes and discovers he can't eat food. It is a logical premise as the MC grows and learns more about his condition as a vampire. The story pacing is decent and slowly builds introducing the supernatural. Overall a recommended read.

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Alright, this novel has one of my least favorite tropes. Nice-guy assassin. Those two tropes just don't work well together.First off, the main character. The best assassin from a fantasy world, can even kill Kings and Queens. Is almost caught on his very first job. He is supposedly a assassin but in reality hes just a vigilante. Side characters. Another review basically talks about this perfectly. All the characters are template characters. Cop who relies on intuition, girl whos a battle maniac, cute little sister, grumpy older brother, super-genius kid who can hack into anything. Plot & writing quality. First off, this novel definitely has a amateurish tinge to it, but seems somewhat refined. The plot, however, seems super forced and is rather boring. Gang members beat up the main character's brother, he beats them up. They come back, with more, because? (This is a world with martial artists, why are these guys so keen on killing themselves) Anyway, he beats them up, takes pity on them, once again because? He decides to kill all the gangs nearby because of some pity story the guy told him. Later, when a cop invited him to dinner a young master decided to beat him up. He beat them up instead, and now decided to destroy his entire company and family. Good ol' vigilantism. It just seems rather forced, especially that young master part. (Again, there are literally martial artists in this world, the young master doesn't have a single martial artist)Anyway, another gripe I have with this novel is "intuition". God it's annoying. A lot of novels go with this really forced way of advancing the plot. A random copy intuitively knows that the main character somehow committed the crime of killing gang members, so she invites him to dinner. A random battle-junky intuitively knows that the MC is the one who fought her before. (he was completely covered in black, no resemblance) Overall, a amateurish novel that is rather low quality in general.

The figure took the form of a young child of about 7-8 years old, who's body was formed from energy as none of her body parts looked like a normal humans.