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DaoistYellowBird
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ntww12
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lo recomiendo es goooooooooo[ooooooooooood
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Author can you please update, infact we want mass release. Am on edge right now, anticipating the next chapters😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Utter nonsense. The grammar is bad. There are "" marks when there is no conversation. The mc's ability has conditions to activate but seems to activate without them. Makes no sense. Author has rushed the book alot. Too much potential wasted over there.
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the grammar in this story is just too awful. I understand that a ruff draft will have mistakes, but this is just unreadable. Writer has an interesting story idea, but giant plot holes in the world building and overall needs more work and polishing.
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I absolutely hate to write reviews but it intrigued me to write a review while reading the story.This story is absolutely a must read! I got sucked into the story as I read more chapters which for me is a banger. The story so far is good and a good start on the place's background I can't wait to see more of it.Overall I can't wait to see where the story goes and how the character develops.All the best Rayne for your first novel.
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This story is really fun and intriguing to read! Eli's carefree lifestyle clashes with the sudden responsibility of navigating a new world, making for an intriguing premise. I enjoy the combination of modern gaming culture and classic adventure elements; it feels like a new take on the isekai genre. Definitely a story with a lot of potential!
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DaoistYellowBird rated it Umbra Rising
May 13,2025
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It's an interesting read. Sort of like a Korean dramaπŸ˜‚I'm curious to find out how the plot turns out. I'm guessing Ha-na and Ji-hoon have a history that'll affect the series alot.Keep writing, Author.
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ntww12
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Love necromancer stories. This looks like it will scratch that itch. Crappy family- check. purposeless life- check. OP job from the get-go? -check. Let's Rock!
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good enough but better option available.
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DaoistYellowBird rated it Blood and Burden
May 12,2025
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enjoyed reading it , keep it coming author.
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DaoistYellowBird rated it Metalady
May 12,2025
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This book is really good. I wake up just to wait the updated.
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DaoistYellowBird rated it Lost Episode Stories
May 12,2025
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well I am trying to create this value. so you can't blame me . but if you see me as an interesting individual . then try reading it.
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