Record of Extinction Destiny

Thank you for this novel. At the beginning I was reading the reviews that said the base of the story is going fast, and yes to me that would be true if the focus of the story is the cultivation part of Mc. I feel like even though the Mc of the story is Qai and his goals that he is trying to achieve, this story is also about his family as a whole and its transformation to a great sect within their generation which is the dream incision by our Mc. So if the author slowed down the development of the story then I am afraid the story would not be as interesting as it is now.So dear author thank you for your hard work and please keep on sharing your story as you envisioned it and we will be glade to follow this world you created.

This novel is stupid. Everything seems more Asian than American even though it's based in America. Lots of inconsistencies. The ending was too abrupt. it just ended with "He got a First class merit but no one knew because it was confidential." ??? what kind of ending was that? they just rounded up an entire arc in TWO paragraphs and said "ya we done with this story".???? Problems with this story are listed here.1) Asian culture in an American setting. eg. Calling people aunts and uncles and also calling others brother or sister (Americans just call people-besides parents and grandparents- by their names regardless of age) Also, terms like Qi etc were used often.2) Repetition 3) There's no flow. No connection between different arcs.4) the balance of gaining points or rewards is tilted. MC did nothing besides reading and all reading materials was provided on a silver platter (including confidential info)5) Everyone just trusted him without hesitation for no actual reason. He just said "Believe me." and they'd just do. 5) The anti gravity arc was simply just cut out. the majority of the book was of him "reaching for the stars". Instead of working on it after making a whole research laboratory, he just did some side quests and the book ended.6) What about Atlantis??? there was a whole civilization dying there and you just left for the side quests. Was making a submarine so important? Just to showoff to the Russians? 7) MC has no remorse. He just bombed a whole area in Mexico. 8) Lots of white supremacy and unfounded nationalism. After all that happened IRL to America, (BLM, police aggression, etc) this whole book just triggered me. 9) Terrible writing and grammar. Why so many exclamation marks?10) I don't even know what the MC looks like. I read the entire book and no mention of his eye or hair colour.11) Time periods was unrealistic. it takes time to draft up something whether digitally or by hand (at least a week or more) yet he just finished building a whole new working submarine in 2 weeks and also got it tested and all. (bro. who is the one designing and labelling the stuff? -_-) 12) He just forgets people he made promises to. What happened to that guy who found his talent? His friends? Mavis or whatever her name was? what about the researchers in the labs? Those professors he poached? I'm done writing .

it was a good story but it got worse and worse midway.. then after about 800 chapters i stopped reading... I can't take it anymore.. from a normal person to superman like.. then to a godlike... the whole story change... GARBAGE! don't read this.. you'll just be disappointed!

This novel brings back the old power rangers villains concept and turns into something amazing.The story isn't rushed and every action has a valid reaction while not being to simple or overly convoluted. I haven't really made any reviews before so I can't put into words how good of a story this but I highly recommend potential readers to check this story out.

translation quality becomes almost unreadable past chapter 40

This is the best fan fic I've ever read. Really. Interesting point of views, perspective and attitude towards the Pokèmon world. Anyways, I've read the whole story, around 1453 chapters. You can find it on the Internet though so if you want you could look but it's mtl so :// Read in your own discretion.

GOOD NOVEL! I LOVE THIS, THIS IS THE BEST ONE OF A KIND NOVEL. PYRO ON TOP.

I think it's pretty good. The one gripe I have is your comma splices and unending single sentences. I think using grammarly might help with that.