Dean. Just Dean. Oh. My. God. The way he was introduced in this chapter 4 was pure perfection. From the moment he casually helped Ada enter the club to his quiet, observant nature, I knew he was going to be a force to be reckoned with. His perspective added a whole new level of intrigue—seeing Ada through his eyes, feeling his controlled yet simmering rage, and realizing that he was more dangerous than anyone else in that club. The moment he saw Ada being attacked, I literally cheered when he stood up and stormed out of his private booth. This chapter was thrilling, and I am OBSESSED with Dean already.

very well written , very vividly written , almost could be better with language , pace and words but it's 5/5

I would prefer you to continue writing with Sci-fi stories because it's much better than your previous story.

This is a really amazing novel, combo of insane technology and magic. It's a personal fav for me but I think you'll love it too. I highly recommend it for anyone who digs fantasy and mecha/space type sci-fi, check it out, you won't regret it.

I really love how the first few chapters are going, also I can't wait to see how she will take revenge on that trashy family. Really good story 💯

When I signed this book here i never imagined it would get this amount of Views, Collections, and Power stone. and for that I the author wants to thank you for finding time to read this my book and those who are planning to read the book. THANK YOU ALL FOR THE LOVE. I appreciate it. And trust me when I say you all will love this book still the end. your comments please my heart Your views build my confidence to continue the book The collections give me hopeyour power stones make me smileBut you GIFTING my book will give me Courage and boost my ability to continue

great book l already love it keep updating

Kaito's stupidity and bad luck are actually so relatable, just like mine, I can say that too. On the other hand, although Misaki's tsundere attitude seems cliché, it is ignored because it helps with the comedy. Overall fast paced and well explained in simple language. Very quality work and a solid pen.

Story is very engaging with system but sometimes the plot confuses me

Great first chapter!  Can’t wait to read the rest!

I really enjoyed this book. The write up are so good. Keep the good work!!!

this story seems fun to read hope to read more later