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NeonSsX
- Joined
- July 1,2024
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Nice, I won't say more than that. It's still in its early stages. It will definitely develop, but the question is when? And will it be a real development or a cliché?
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well a great book the only problem is the mc is confusing to understand i still don't understand if he is a normal human or saint
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The story is enticing, the chapters were a bit short though. Overall this story has a big chance to be contracted. Keep up the great work man!
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Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooioooooooooooooooooiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodထ
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A very unique story ,very excited for the upcoming chapter i hope we get the next chapter update as soon as possible just by reading the first chapter im already in love with this novel😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Let's give credit where it is due... this novel is incredible. From the detail to the immersion experience as well the ethereal atmosphere..its all amazing...the character are grounded individuals instead of becoming a collective character, I appreciate that..the world building is solid, and without going into spoilers I think this is a top tier read....
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why did you stop, did the book not get contracted?
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Best novel i have seen so farLove the writer so much 💜💜
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sarangayor 💖💟💖💖💕💕 weldone author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep it up🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Hi 👋! Author here. Third book, I hope everyone supports it. Unlike the previous two, this one's gonna be a banger, but it'll a bit of time to getbto the juicy parts.Stick around and find out!
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I am the type of reader that only reads the first chapter or so then calls quits so my reviews may be a bit lazy but you got me to reach the second chapter just by mc's comedy so I approve. I know writing and stuff takes extensive planning and it can be a tiring chore really. For me I like stuff straight to the point so if I were to write a novel it would have story and world building but maybe missing bits of process of explanation in logic. All I see in first chapters is that authors do like 33 paragraphs but a lot of them are just written in 2 lines with good spacing. I am digressing... Anyway you could make it big as an author you are able to overcome your hurdle of consistency!
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Wow my dear author this time you went your way out with this one It got me into the world of imagination the moment i read the first chapter.It's really the best Park book i ever read and i strongly recommend it
Teacher, The School Beauty is Farting