The book has a good story lines and it makes a person keep wanting to read more unfortunately it is short.I hope the Author next writing a another should be considerate and write a bit long one however the Author is good in story writing.It would be so good to have more Authors who write about rural to urban stories, where we get clear pictures and story lines with inspiration. Bravo Author, the story is really good to read, I would recommend anyone to read it.

i liked the first book, and i was really disappointed that you stopped it, but im more than happy to read a new one with better improvements ! I hope you won't disappoint us ! good luck ! and thanks again for rewriting!

It can be a five star but you update your novels like once a week so that’s killing you. But yeah your stories are good but as mention above you update stability isn’t that great. Keep up the good work hopefully in the future you find more time for your novels. I know this isn’t a main source of income so you may not have time for novels but good luck .

Story is developing quite well. There are a lot of small mysteries that the author has sprinkled throughout each chapter that has the potential to develop into interesting plots. Writing quality is good and error-free.

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I am one of the earliest readers of this novel and so far I am really enjoying reading this book. Chapters are written quite well without any apparent grammatical mistakes. Since the book is new so I cant say anything about how the storyline will continue but I hope this will be one of the best books out there. Keep up the good work author. Good luck.

Very promising. More muscle brain please and thank you!

Just got to chapter 100 living it so far. A good blend of the time spent in and out of the game

I like how your story going, 🤗👍 it' show in future your story  provide us more  fantasy, mystery  and power of characters supernatural chills. This novel delivers a  adventure with a cursed coin, Spooky tales and hidden dangers.

This novel is written very well with no time wasted on over describing, whilst producing vivid descriptions that really add the MC's world and his predicament.I really like how the story picks up from the first chapter and progression is made rather quickly.Great job, author!

keep writing, this is actually very interesting and better than my rpg theme novel. I'm looking forward for more chapters, definitely gonna read this again, because I think I will learn a lot from your novel that can also improve my writing as well, kudos to you Author🔥 you're novel is highly recommended

This novel, I was first drawn in by the cover and the synopsis of the story. To be honest, I was first hesitant to pick it up, due to the first sentence of the main character being betrayed, since I've been reading lots of betrayal tropes and I'm kinda sick of it by now, but I'm glad I decided to read it, also glad that Moulin isn't the kind of person who is 'I will never fall in love again after getting betrayed'.Ergh, Moulin, a goddess. Gorgeous, brave and lovable. Can I just say, after reading this I now want a snow wolf. It's so dang cute!The mystery, the magic, family love, the transmigrated MC who isn't as weak as they thought and the love interest. All of this contributes so much and makes this story even better! This is, also BL! which is a total plus!  The plot is now kinda on a cliff hanger-ish, so there's not much I can say about it now except, I WANT MORE! I'm now on the verge of wanting to open up the author's brain to know what happens next.