Timeline's Last Defense

(This review has been made after I posted Chapter 315.)Hey there. It's been almost six months since I've started writing this novel, so I think it's about due time for me to give another review to this novel from my perspective. Of course, if you take a look at the latest reviews I've gotten, you'd see that a great portion of them say that MC acts incredibly cowardly and newbie-like for someone who has a lot of experience, with some of them even talking about how I rely on a certain phrase a lot of the time (the phrase in question is "could not help but").From this point onward, there's a possibility that I might spoil a few things about the story, which I would like to apologize in advance for. However, I'll still try my best to not spoil it.First and foremost, let me talk about my reliance on a few key phrases, with the most glaring one you'd find while reading the story is the counter for "could not help but" in the paragraph comments. Then again, there are a few other key phrases I tend to use as a crutch throughout the novel, but let me point out that English is not my first language.Aside from that, I've taken a great portion of the inputs you've given me, which I sincerely appreciate, and have varied my usage of words ever since. From Chapter 200 onwards, rarely has the "could not help but" phrase ever been used. But alas, reviews mentioning it still pop up, so I guess worrying about is useless in the end.Moving on from that, let's talk about the MC's personality at the beginning of the novel. Similar to the active change I've made towards the omission of the usage of certain phrases, I've also taken action towards changing the MC's personality outright at Chapter 115 into something that was more in line with what people expect from someone with a lot of experience.But once again, I still get reviews about how they don't like MC's personality at the beginning and how they call him multiple names under the sun. Believe me when I say I've already taken note of it and that I am planning to rewrite the beginning of the story once I graduate college (which would happen hopefully a few months after I post this review). I'm not oblivious towards MC's personality at the beginning, especially if I know why he acts like that in the first place.In the end, I just wanted to make this review to tell everyone who is reading and who is planning to read this novel a couple of things. For those who have read my novel up to the latest chapter and are continuing to read it, I thank you from the bottom of my heart.And for those who are planning to pick up the book from the title and the synopsis, just keep an open mind. It's part of the reason why I made at least 90 chapters of the novel free, after all. Of course, I'd like it if you get to around Chapter 115 at the very least, but I won't hold it against you if you don't.Once again, I would like to thank everyone who has given me support and constructive criticism of what I've been writing thus far, making me realize that I still have a lot to improve on. I hope you enjoy the journey the novel shall take you on.(This review shall be removed once the beginning of the story has been rewritten to fit the overall narrative better.)

what i am gonna say is that the novel is pretty stupid about giving the mc a golden finger cultivation technique. Like why the FUCK IS THERE A DIVINE WOODEN SWORD IN A LOW-CLASS SHITTY SCHOOL STORAGE.

This story has fresh Scenario but the rare some CLiches hear and ther  and our mc  is  a bit op but the slowly Growing To OP  Type he is Not  Instantly op like most MC .. and the story Gives out a cultivation/slice of life of 2 Siblings Kinda felling IN the curent chapters and develops The world quite nicely 2,so give it a Try it might be for you if you like Growing to op Type Cultivation Novels whit a mix of Slice of life kinda feeling

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"Snow, Jewel, What are you guys doing here? Where is Illion?..."

Divus' mind was currently in disarray, his mom was everything to him. The thought of never seeing her again really made him want to cry. Alfalogia was the only person in his life. Literally, so it was no understatement that he was attached. He decided to get up and train for a few hours to see where he would get. His mom told him that his magic training was the best she had ever seen, so he always put off training, saying it was something he could do when he was older. Now that Alfalogia was gone, the struggle wasn't learning the techniques, but the creation of them, because he had no guidance. He then looked at his skills from his Stats Tab:

Jalter - Pfft...