well I have written so many stories but your story is looking like a something new fresh fresh fruit because it is so nicely return that I am looking like it a fabulous work

IT'S EASY TO COMPREHEND WITH THE STORY COZ OF BASIC AND ELEGANT VOCABULARY! THE STORY REALLY REFERS TO RANDOMNESS. SO FAR SO GOOD. I WISH TO READ SECOND CHAPTER WITH SAME INTREST ❤                                -YOUR LOVE                                         LUFFY

please give review on it will be helpful for me thank for reading my Novel

I love the gamelike structure and the mystery games that Eris and her crew had to go through. Go Eris.... 😃. I enjoy the trainigs and each new realm they encounter. I hope this continued and doesnt end up unfinished.  

Wow. Its amazing. Thank you Author for this wonderful story. Looking forward to your next release.

ngl its good book ı hope it ll be more fameous

the story feels super rushed. like alot of details are missing between a couple chapters.

Your way of explaining all the caliber and scenarios are amazing. The character seems to be overpowered, if you could fix that then it's great

very good start of volume                                                                                                                                 

It's interesting. The formatting has a few issues, and the writing is a little unusual, but it's not bad. The author has a long way to go, but so do most authors. The chapters are a little lengthy, but some people like that. You should at least give the first chapter a read.

This book is very inspiring, I hope to go this journey with our mc and grow along the way ☺️nice work.

Hello, Blizzard here!As the author of this book, I love it and am sure you are going to love it too. Don't believe me? Then give it a try.Now, some things to note.1) From my experience, I know readers don't like a pure smut novel (there are always exceptions though) and need a good story to go along with it so they can enjoy both things better. So, the storyline is main in this book and lemons and other things are there only to enhance and make the story more enjoyable.2) MC's Harem will be big and by the end of the story, he will have more than 10+ women.3)They all will have a deep relationship with him, and will be an important part of the storyline.Note: There is no poison like NTR i or Yuri in the story. But it will have netori and MC will have a few one night stands too because not everyone he has s*x will become his women.But, Let me say this again, this is a story based novel, so expect the number of smut chapters to be low (at least lower than my Lust System book🙈) Updates will be stable, 7-14 chapter/week.Now, if you have any other questions, feel free to ask below. I'll try to answer all of them.