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MohammedChota
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One of the best novels I've come across in this platform tbh🥰✨
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this is a very good story . everybody should read this .
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this story is a wonderful blend of slice of life, comedy, and romance with a nice pacing and a lot of potential it's easy to see that the author cares about this story and puts their heart into it with constant new chapters you won't be waiting for long and yes while it is simple you don't really need anything more in a rom com.
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I’m not sure how I feel about this yet. The best friend seems to have a history of hidden jealousy and acts on her feelings for the FLs husband. That’s just not a friend. The husband got emotionally tangled with the best friend and admits to loving her. All that while you’d think he would still be in the honeymoon phase with the wife he supposedly loves and is now chasing. But neither him nor the “best friend” have talked. It seems to be he’s just reacting to getting caught and is chasing his wife. This is our ML? Eww. Infidelity is a deal breaker as it is. Infedility with your BFF under your own roof really is next level on the “eff off” scale. Infedility under your own roof with your partner & BFF who have intense and even loving feelings being shared is just ‘Game Over’. I enjoy the angst to a point, but at this level, it’s motivation for an independent life. Personally, idk if I could be even remotely assed to open my trust to either.
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I think this is a good book, I like the blood knights shit and Rena op level up ability or whatever I think it’s pretty cool, you don’t get one scene with Lilith until like ch 18 and it’s not even the real her, it’s her in a trial, like brother it’s the whole premise.Also i have a strong inkling this is at least AI edited because, it’s not that certain phrases come up a lot, but when introspective dialogue about how a nighamisnt afraid anymore or is ready for what’s next. It’s just a bit annoying and the book would’ve got a 4 star if not for the sprinkling of slightly annoying corny monologue and dialogue when it doesn’t need to be emotional. I know how it is, I’ve written thousands f words worth of fiction using ai, I can tell after like 4 chapters if something is ai written unless heavely edited by a human after. Other than that great story.
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A really good concept. The story pace is relaxing and the author didnt rush the details👍👍👍👍
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Even though the flow of the story is a bit dragging and the character development of the ML is starting to make no sense (CHAPTER 1-31), it still makes you read for more, especially when the FL's character development is starting to break from its shell. I like the POVs of each character, making you torn between the ML and the 2nd ML (like author please, keep the 2nd ML to the FL, but is there a great moment for the ML and the FL?).I'll be waiting for new updates...
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Great work author finally a good lion story but I wish the storyline isn't so complicated so soon with the challenging pride leader stuff , I think the kael should have some level of power first before any face off ofcourse that's just my thinking it's still a great story.Pls 🥺🙏 let the update be stable and fast.
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Author here! I am enjoying writing this story, but I can see why some might not like all the abuse the mc takes at the start, but that changes over time. Still, I think that this book will make you laugh, and put you on the edge of your seat at time! Please at least enjoy the free chapters before making any judgements!
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Good as always. . ..............................................
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