Think,earn,grow:The road to your first million

do these people believe if they put hundreds of the same story with few differences i would read 1 of them the roman empire was different so I came here every week to see what comes next so i can know when its coming out not to see usless  novels like these coming out

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Overall a decent novel and i quite like the mc for being selfish and thinking only about himself after all the fighting he has done, it makes him seem more human than those mc's that can kill millions witjout batting an eye

There is a lot of potential in this story. Its story development is fast and purposeful. Each development really hits home with such a emotional subject matter, and it did honestly hook me in.I would like the author to just take their time abit more. Slow it down and include more detail. The first 'date' of the two characters could of had a bit more time and detail put into it as an example. Great story, great development. Just needs a bit more time put into certain areas and this could be an amazing piece of work.

The progression feels to fast and I dislike the characters so far. Feels like a wish fulfillment story. But as far as begining writing this story has some potential maybe it will get better.

I just like it, good, okay, yes, right, yeah..interesting..❁

"great! if the material exit in this world we can build it"

he was trying to merge the power of lightning and flames, cause amongst the elements. lightning and fire are the closest in likeness. due to the Two elements being violent in nature.