I love the way the author is having fun writing thisyou can really feel itgood job with the word count too 👍 an interesting novel 😉😊

Ok. After reading a little bit, I realised that I laughed. I can say that it has already hooked me because I have not encountered a novel that made me laugh for a long time.The colourfulness, reactions and behaviour of the main character made me laugh the most. Since I pay attention to how the characters work and their reactions, this thing, which is a factor that causes me to leave many novels from the third or fourth chapter, did not bother me at all.On the contrary, the main character himself seemed to be quite good.Of course, even if I can't comment much on world-building issues at the moment, we will still be able to see everything in the future with the way the story works.I give this novel 5 stars.

The strength of the novel lies in its use of descriptive words and storytelling. Very helpful, helps visualizing the events that take place in the bookThe main plot point atp, though engaging, arrives unexpectedly leaving some of my questions unanswered. A bit fast paced but it's okay It's got potential 🔥and. the world building too, it's peak work

Hi. As the author of this novel I personally invite you to take part of this wonderful fantasy, let us explore this world together. I mean that. Please don't hesitate to share your opinions.

Peak novel, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work hoping for the new chapters.

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When it comes to Mystery and story development, I'll give the story a 10/10. I've been reading it for a while now and I still can't put it down. Who kidnapped them? what is the organization after? the Author is just killing me by leaving me hanging.

I've not read many sci-fi stories as grounded as Xen24. The word development is quality over quantity and I love the intense work put into drafting the storyline so far. Keep it coming

so guy graduates college at bottom of his class, as he is the last to leave the college dorm he suddenly gets a system, he is given a choice of 3 systems, he picks the hedge fund rich tycoon system, I wish he would have chosen the demon contract system. He gets 10% interest on liquid funds so he keeps money in his bank account to earn system interest. Ding hedgefund system rewards host with 10% interest of liquid funds. System quest appearance makes the man, Ding Host system is issuing timed quest within 6 hours upgrade your appearance system will grade new appearance, ding system evaluates haircut at 88% reward 100% cash back refunded credit payment gor haircut, ding watch critical hit reward, the wealthy have great posture, host rewarded with posture correction, System quest: Gentleman are learned men, read classic works of literature system will reward property based on how many books read in 14 days. I am puzzled and confused at the things author thinks is luxury. A guy in a BMV argues with him over a girl, then a guy in a Toyota Alphard appears and the guy in the BMW is scared off, I won't fight with someone with a Alphard, really? Alphards cost the same as a Camry is it really that luxury over a bmw, author even breaks down cost of BMW over Alphard and mc is now rich, maybe the authors wants one.. the other items like MC trades in his Xiao is phone for a iPhone, and he talks about how LV is not that great he prefers Armani are more in line with luxury.

great story straightforward the author know what he 's doing.recommended

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