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"I've never read a novel like this before—it's truly unique and captivating!"

Una mierda completa, problemas que se podrían resolver con una cuantas palabras, un avance muy lento de la trama, en fin una calificación muy sobrevolarada tiene esta mierda de novela

Chapter 3 was absolutely gut-wrenching. I felt Ada’s pain and fear so intensely. The betrayal by Stephen was infuriating—how could he do that to his own sister?! The writing is so powerful; I was right there with Ada, feeling the dread creep in as she realized what was happening. The villains were terrifying, especially the tattooed man and his disgusting smirk. The tension was almost unbearable, and I was holding my breath the whole time. The way the author makes us connect with Ada’s emotions is incredible. This is storytelling at its finest—raw, gripping, and full of suspense!

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This novel focuses on the mc well in every moment,Pacing is a bit fast but it shows good character development of the mc like how he turns from powerless to having some power and mc choosing a choice either revenge or saving ruby was a good turning point well written in the story,hope to see what choices he will choose and how it turns out later on.Good work Author!

It's not bad. The author has a grasp on storytelling, but the Asian "Brother Enzo" and "sister Ruby" in a supposedly Western setting gave me flashback icks. The  English is a bit awkward, and there's the odd grammar mistake, but nothing dreadful.The world building is decent, but as others say, the interpersonal interactions don't feel natural. They are stiff.I had to laugh at the "uniform". What make a transparent plastic swimsuit a uniform? But somehow, it has a pouch to put things in?  I mean other than what you would expect to find in a swimsuit "pouch

Although a bit early to say this. It should be a banger, upto this point it has been Great !! Hope for more, keep it up author 🙏. Wishing you the best :)

This popped up in my recommendations...after reading the reviews gave it a go. wow! I am at the edge of my seat, the main character particular planning and the way story lets us know what happened previously, while keeping us in the loop currently time. What can I say...I am loving it. it's refreshing to have author not be dramatic, or pointlessly lengthen a chapter to get to a point. I cannot wait to see how the story unfolds!

An enjoyable story and an interesting MC. Took a while to get into it but it was worth it in the end. Great Job

Best hip hop story here pls dont stop writing this.                                                                                                               

It is a really nice story with very good character development. I love reading it please add more chapters as the story is getting interesting