The Whispering Verses

What a journey been long time since i got into a novel, i really hope there is a side story, but whit this ending it satisfying enough, well for fellow reader don't hesitate for reading this novel, you wil got hook really fast.



2/21/2024

He a pookie
Just a half burnt face that's all.
Ok in all seriousness, want some spoilers? Well, Nahan is quite a challenging villain if u think about the main couple's level

After reading the beginning, my thoughts inevitably drift to LoTm, but the power system and narrative feel distinctively original. The character development and vivid portrayal of the protagonist's emotions and plans upon waking up in a stranger's body, penniless and with no memory, left a strong impression. The fantasy elements are intriguing. However, I do notice that the events seem to fall into place quite conveniently for the main character so far. I hope that as the story progresses, the challenges become more complex and require genuine effort from the MC to overcome obstacles.

It's remarkable how fortuitous it is that the first person he encounters promptly enlists him into one of the few reputable factions. Additionally, the spells he possesses, like the glowing finger that comes in handy twice and the one that helps him in an illogical situation, appear almost too convenient. For instance, why would a chef suddenly agree to a card game with the MC after a mischievous child bit his hand and caused a minor injury? I期待看到更真实且富有挑战的情节发展。

In general, I appreciate the storyline, but I've come across a potential issue. It appears that a harem is forming, with several key female characters having kissed the protagonist by chapter 500, often without clear initiation from him. This is something I personally don't enjoy, as it seems to be used as a justification for the strong trust and support the females provide. The later characters appear to instantly fall for the main character, which feels forced. Moreover, having multiple partners, even if not legally binding, goes against the moral norms in the story's world, yet the MC doesn't disclose these relationships to the girls. They discover it on their own, surprisingly accepting it, despite some being high-ranking like a princess, a powerful seer, a renowned author, and a ring warlock who sees herself as his possession and is related to the princess. There are also other female characters who show interest but haven't progressed beyond that point.

Additionally, despite the revelation that his true affection lies elsewhere, the MC continues to maintain these ambiguous connections without clarifying them. Lastly, the MC expresses disgust towards cross-dressing, even when it's explained as a popular trend among playwrights, which makes it difficult for me to engage with the story.

Due to these concerns, I've decided to hold off reading further until the translator catches up to where I stopped, and I'll reassess if a harem tag is added. If not, I might consider re-reading to see if the author provides a satisfactory resolution or逆转 in the plot.

Very interesting can't put my phone down