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FictionalJack
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- July 1,2024
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"I've only read a few chapters, and I'm already a fan! This story has so much potential, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
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I'm shamelessly giving myself 5 stars in every category! π If you're enjoying the story, please don't forget to vote and show your support. Your feedback means a lot to me!
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Your story is amazing..you can do it..will be waiting for more update..
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novel look good π look forward for more updates
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I really liked the use of Grammer and the general setting of the story as well as the plot though I'm struggling with the pronunciation of these names I look forward to future chapters
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Another book from my favorite author! π₯³I love how the story begins and progress so far. The narative is strong, the characters are alive, and the plot is very exciting. I was hooked at the very first chapter! πFor author's loyal readers, there is no need to hesitate. Let's just jump into this new ride! πFor new readers, welcome to the party and give this story a try. You won't regret it! π
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Grammar and choice of words are bad and I think it's common for starters but maybe will improve in future. As for other elements, I don't know how to give a review because I didn't really write a serious review. That's all and hopefully will improve in future. :)
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First few chapters are rushed the author is just making the mc strong and crazily strong π but after some time the story gets interesting and fun to read!!!!!
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the book is a good read so far only issue I'm have is Chapters 38 to 40 are repeats of chapters 35 to 37
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writing a review for ur own book ain't easy but if anyone questions ask
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UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021:I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past.I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy.Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!
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This book is just too frustrating to read
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