it's a lovely story as  you have a great sense of creative story can't wait to see the story develop

im not gonna read a book without knowing what the book is about can someone tell me

Really great work so far, and I'm writing this at about 7 chapters, hoping to see more of this, although it starts of typical and cliche, I'm hoping to see more from this.

this made excited and giggle and shi, cant wait for the future chapters                                                                                                                                             

Can't say much about the story yet (only 5 Ch. out, ultra fresh) However, it piqued my interest, definitely has an interest/fresh-out take on the game/sys. genre, feeling like partially survival games, making me thought of 'the forest' a bit.And ultimately, I have FUN reading it!

This novel is one of the best in beast taming novels, I advise you to read it 👍👍

This is my first novel so I'm going to be a little gentle with myself but if I had to be objective there are a lot of gaps and some terms that come up in this one, of course that won't stop me from writing and providing you with better quality work!

interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.

Genuinely a good novel ( and it's only the beginning ) Although the Author considers his own work at an amateur level, I remarked some very interesting passages and the whole story is really descriptive and intriguing which puts him above that level in my oppinion.Definitely worth a shot, especially since it promises to be a very long novel which will only improve with time.

A very good story with a good plot but just a bit slow paced

I'm actually going to give my book, a shameless review. Because I know I tried,I pride myself in diligence in meticulous world crafting. First this is no Harem novel, except for those whose religion curtails having numerous partners. Just basically a slow romance.Second, I plan to write long, at the beginning I may start with few chapters a week, before I gradually compass and grow as a writer. Thereby writing numerous a week, I am thinking of stopping at 2000.Lastly do note that, I may make mistakes in the writing or history of a pantheon, I'm not an all rounder and this definitely part of the writing process.Thanks  have a fun read. Lhav K.

this is so intriguing  definitely adding to my library