HER LADYSHIP HAS RETURNED

I love it. I do hope they don’t end up hurting each other because it feels like real love. But when you are that young you do stupid things. The book seems so real, and reminds me of when was young...so long ago. Can’t wait for more updates

Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

Its a good book if you like changes that are drastic in what would feel like short chapters. Honestly I stopped reading because I took a break and now i cant find on what chapter I am but its honestly a good book. I am a pretty sad that a lot of characters from the early chapters have died though.

Some people might think that withholding information from the reader, in what it feels like every chapter, is interesting and gives a sense of mystery. Although the author explains some things in a chapter there are always more things that are left unexplained. I think its nice in the first 30-40 chapters but after that it ends up tiresome and boring and that, imo , hurts the novel which seems to have great potential.

It feels like a very generic VRMMO story, where the entire plot is literally World of Warcraft adapted into VR with worldwide players on a single set of servers. I'm not joking about it being WoW, large portions if not the majority of the game are liberally ripped from that, including the story, races, certain enemies and bosses, the bag system, the classes, etc. including characters and enemies such as Sylvanas Windrunner and Hogger. The main things which I think has changed is the combat system being VR, so freeform with the option for getting critical hits when targeting weakpoints, changes to skills and how they're earned/the drop system to a lesser extent, and the uses of life professions e.g. engineering.The focus of the story is very much on the action and the in game skill system, which at least don't disappoint. It captures a bit of the glory of the loot grind, and keeps the combat somewhat fresh for the first forty chapters, although no guarantees to how it will feel a hundred chapters or a thousand down the line.Characters are alright in that they have the basics but they don't stand out in any way at all. There's motivation, some degree of character such as the MC being "filial" and "driven

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Read up to chapter 21The story has just begun and so far it has really become very engaging. The writing quality is rather good and readable. Some small grammatical mistakes but nothing to really talk about. Theres also a lot of local terminology which if you are not a native of india or so you wouldn’t understand. Fortunately the author also understood this and helps with providing information either as context clues or in a “authors note”. As for the updates is has been pretty consistent with a chapter every day which a good amount of word count. The story does move along at a decent pace and some chapters theres no movement at all due to some important information being disclosed. As for the main character, I wont spoil much but he can be a type of dislike while liking him. Hes not the perfect person in a sense in where the things he does might confuse you but rather funny in some ways. The way he moves around the new world can be seem as arrogant but it can’t be helped considering he has many advantages. The character development is still proceeding since its only been 21 chapters but theres much potential as he grows to be more famous. There are some issues as to what his true goals are and why. Does he want to be number 1? Also why does he want to be number 1? In the first chapter you see his dreams and wants but not as to why he wants it or basically the motive. I would suggest giving the novel a chance for the first 5 chapters. Things start to pick up when he starts using his system abilities and his knowledge about the entertainment system.

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