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I can’t help but think of LOTM after reading the beginning, but the power system and writing feel original to me. I was impressed by the character building and the very realistic descriptions of how he felt and what he planned to do after waking up in a stranger’s body with no money or memory, and the fantasy system seems really cool. I will say, things seem to be lining up a little too conveniently for MC, at least from the little action I’ve seen so far, but I’m hoping things get more complex and he actually has to work to overcome conflicts as the story continues.Spoiler
How convenient that one of the first people he runs into recruits him into one of the few established “good” groups in society, how convenient that the one spell he knows (glow in the dark finger) has already helped out twice, and the only other spell he acquired helped him cheat in a difficult situation that made no logical sense. Like why would a chef just offer to make a bet with MC using playing cards after a little brat bit his hand and made him bleed?
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