The Unrequited heart: Forbidden kin

heads up. after a while, you'll start seeing sprinkles of xenophobia. Not as blatant as some other books, but it's there. Man, it feels an inferiority complex manifesting when you constantly try to put down other countries. When you have to mandate that in all your literature. Just don't mention them at all, why do you have to constantly whine like you're butthurt?

The story and the plot was so nice! I couldn't find a words to describe how good it is. I love Ryan's character so much! Both bad and good in the right people. One of the best story that I've read! This is so recommendable!

Looking forward to this one!Is this the same one with Prodigal system which dropped in the past? well, I'm gonna look forward to this novel!I hope the first release would be massive ones!!

How is this the number one trending LN for the week? Smells like bots are already abusing QI's ranking. 90 chapters. . . bad story, crap character development, and horrible cliche's. *Sigh* QI needs to look into fixing bot abuse.

Copy paste from "red packet server"... Not a fanfic for any wechat related cultivation novel folks, it's copy paste... Let's see if the author will shut up or will he come out and say that he post it here because he's a fan or something...

I’m Normally into those ...heart racing, steamy oh my gosh so in love with the ml type of romances novels and/or those torture my soul with a relatable heartbreaking tragic romances... But to keep it all the way LIVE this is theee best novel and that’s out of my normal genre without a heavy romantic setting. Being a girl of course I’m a sucker for romance, but this novel was like a much needed vacation after a drama filled binge. The Introduction of characters is so refreshing, I can’t help but feel attached or relate to certain aspects in a character or moved by the dedication and fighting for self improvement. Even the fight scenes make you wish it was made into an Anime show, it’ll make you laugh and cry or make you cry from laughing, but mostly it’ll have you at the edge of your seat cursing the author for not updating fast enough!!!(ahah 🙄 but we still love you LOP) This novel is so wickedly written, its not some cliche or rewrite of a classic, this is hella freaking original and let me tell you I guarantee that if you even read the first chapter you’ll be hooked, so join us on this cultivating journey.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------That sypnopsis alone deserve a 5 stars

Very rough a lot of the problems can be easily solved though with a simple edit by someone even slightly proficient in english The main character is incredibly edgy but expresses it immaturerly and incredibly often, as if he has 8th Grade Syndrome. His trigger word is death if you say that, or it even flits across his unstable little mind be prepared for a full on ****storm. The largest flaws with the novel, in my opinion is the characters very exaggerated descriptions of himself and his the constant references to his past life, it doesn't really move on from that so your often pulled back to something that does not help build character depth