They say revenge is better served cold right, but again love conquers all, hahaha

good writing style, interesting characters ,keep it up ,

Ok I take back what I said before, I was wrong about the pacing being slow. The development turned realy interesting real quick, I should've waited for more chapter.

An honest review from a fellow author.The Word building in the first ten chapters is enough to give the novel a solid foundation as they include ample clues about the setting being based around Roman mythology and martial cultivation with a strong revenge theme laying the groundwork for a villainous MC's rise to power.Evidence suggests that you're writing in Russian and translating to English either personality or with AI assistance. Part of chapter 4 is in Russian, and the mother's name switched languages once or twice. Careful with using AI tools, could affect contract considerations.Still rather readable overall. Translator for Super  Gene 2 can't even keep genders straight.The premise is solid and I look forward to seeing where you take the story and how you flesh in the cultivation system as you mix Roman mythos with Chinese cultivation elements.+1 on the cat girl maid. The descriptions are good but could be a little less wordy at times. Paragraph length and spacing could use improvements. (To fit better with WN/LN style and platform) Ie. Mobile friendly.As that is how most readers access the platform.  Still not that bad as is.

I love it but I don't know if my viewers like it so if you find any errors or any mistakes can you please help me out

I'm hooked on this fantasy adventure! The world is both enchanting and mysterious, and the characters have me invested in their stories. The promise of more magic and thrilling quests is incredibly exciting.

Please give this book a shot this is my first ever novel hope y’all enjoy 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

Why is Dragos so charming though? I can’t wait for more updates!

very good writing and comedy , must read now 👍🏻

The story seems really captivating, and I'm already curious about the mc backstory *o*

As much as I want to say that every reaction by either politicians of our country or the west is 2d and fictional but they are not...these reactions genuinely feel so real.. something they might really do...

Writer of Broken world: Lawbreakers, here.If you like action, world building and lore, beast taming, and some romance, and more...I recommend you dive right in.But no need to take my word for it. Read and see for yourself.