The Sweetest 'Fake' Couple

This Hollow had all but disappeared, he had been forgotten and became a legend.

" Hi Mom !" I said .

I said yep what a concept

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"Sucker Father, I go."

I love the story, it's very well structured... The main character also...Even though I don't like Twilight very much, the characters are good...And bring together the originals is a brilliant idea... To be continued...

I would say, Up until now everything is a masterpiece👏👏👏👏

It was an alright read. The story had some interesting parts, and the characters were decent. The pacing was fine and picked up as the revenge plot kicked in. I'm hoping for more kingdom-building elements in the future; personal strength is great, but I'd like to see more focus on his subordinates too

the level of racism long surpasses the normal kind you find in Chinese novels but blatantly uses the slurs, in the chapter of him running the marathon he uses the N word with a hard er out of no where like that's normal

The story is quite good and well written, however the pacing is quite slow and the focus is only on the romance part. I picked it up for the Gacha and fantasy, but still the romance is quite interesting and I'm liking it despite not coming here for romance. As for the story, if we exclude the dates and dinner, the only real development was him helping his mother out. But again from the perspective of a romance novel, the characters are developing, there are feelings and emotions so that's a great thing.

below average,story pacing is too slow,sometimes it takes whole chapter to describe the appearance of a character,mc don't even use his abilities property,comedy feels pretty forced,