Nice story   make more. chapter   and make more improve your chapter and novels good good make more story waiting for your story's and novel

I can't with story! First 2 chaps are just crazy hahah I can't even bet who I would like to be the fl Ava or Eva. I like Ava ofc but Eva! My girl is fighting for the sake of her remaining brain cells

the characters has depth and the story is lore rich ,i love it

I love the concept, and this version is even better then the last. I can’t tell you how much I am looking forwards to reading the rest of it.

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

So far this is one of the books I’ve read that I’ve definitely add to my fav list. For anyone who’s seeing this review of mine, just read even chap 1 and I promise you won’t be able to stop😌🔥

Upload more please! I like the tension between the two leads. I'm really hoping Kane would forgive King but idunno, I'm just so happy that I found a bl book like this. Exactly what I really want to read these days.

Big fan of your books glad you’re working on this one.  Are you gonna rewrite Do I really have a system? Because I enjoy that one and how creative your main character was with fighting. I also enjoyed where the story was going same with this book.

From what I've read, the story is captivating and it stays true to its nature. The MC feels like a true antihero/villian character and he does exactly what he needs to do to survive and grow stronger, also the side characters feel real and well thought out. Fight scenes are great, but that's expected from Legioneer so I have to give it to him. I loved SSS, but I might like this one even more. Great job, Legioneer!

So far, very intriguing story, very gripping and leaving readers for more! Please continue to write! The flow is ultra smooth and the linguistic-wise, it's well-written!

Happy Writing, I am waiting to finish this story....                                                                                                              

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