The Grand Alteration (Retry)

I dropped this novel coz of the Author holding the MC back it’s need 4 months he is stuck at 3 order Cultivation and he is fighting 6 order Cultivation. Why let him struggle when he can level up, your system is useless honestly. Instant learning and adaptability useless skill.

A novel screaming china Nambawan, china stronk, china good people, etc. looks like the author wants to suck ccp balls. what a shame this was a good novel too but was ruined.

I want to read your story but you just locked your story in just ten chapters, come on man that is not enough to review your story for me...

normally i would consider story like this as a masterpiece specially now that i qm into sci fi but there just so much fillers. imagine an entire chapter dedicated to the mc question himself  and having a breakdown. the seem to want to focus on character development but got to focus on it that it feels like he is using it to increase the word count. so i feel bad.

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Gotta say this is a pretty good novel by web novel standards, the premise and setting of the book definitely was not what I expected in a good way. Character development is there, and it is decent, although basic everyone acts with purpose and could be a real person. Mc is logical and practical, not ruthless but definitely willing to do things to get what he wants. Setting is interesting and I am excited to how the world is going to be explored. The brother relationship in the novel is awesome and a breath of fresh air compared to the loner mc or the little sister tropes. Writing quality is decent, the sentences flow well and it makes sense. Overall would recommend to anyone wanting a new fresh take on beast gamer novels. The world works and there are no glaring plot holes to my knowledge.

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